Question

【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下面一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：

1、 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞；

2、 只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My father took me out camping for the first time when I was seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.

One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue（燒烤）. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky— they were looked like rain ! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured.

That day I didn’t learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity (重力).

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】teach前加 to

【2】come → came

【3】have → having

【4】immediate → immediately

【5】arrows后on → at

【6】Neither → None

【7】was → were

【8】去掉 were 或 looked

【9】but → and

【10】impressive 前a → an

【解析】

【1】teach前加 to 考查動(dòng)詞的用法。want后跟非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞做賓語(yǔ)時(shí)用動(dòng)詞不定式，to不能省略

【2】come → came 考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)本文主體時(shí)態(tài)是一般過去式，故come改為came

【3】have → having 考查非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。前一句已有謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，have做伴隨狀語(yǔ)，邏輯主語(yǔ)是句子的主語(yǔ)，與邏輯主語(yǔ)是主動(dòng)關(guān)系，且與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞動(dòng)作同事進(jìn)行，故用v-ing形式

【4】immediate → immediately考查副詞。本句中應(yīng)該使用副詞immediately來修飾謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞jumped，在句中做狀語(yǔ)。故把immediate改為immediately

【5】arrows后on → at 考查介詞。固定搭配shoot..at…不能使用介詞on。at表示瞄準(zhǔn)的對(duì)方或者方向。故把on改為at

【6】Neither → None 考查代詞。代詞neither表示兩者都不…；而本句中沒有提及兩者，應(yīng)該是有很多的鳥。故使用none表示三者或者三者以上的全部否定。故把neither改為none

【7】was → were 考查主謂一致。本句的主語(yǔ)是復(fù)數(shù)名詞arrows，所以謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞使用復(fù)數(shù)形式were。故把was改為were

【8】去掉 were 或 looked考查固定搭配。本句是指箭如雨下，要么使用look like看起來像..；要么使用 be like…像…一 樣。故去掉were或者looked。

【9】but → and 考查連詞。我們四處逃跑，很幸運(yùn)的是沒有人受傷。根據(jù)上下文語(yǔ)境可知表示并列關(guān)系。故把but改為and

【10】impressive 前a → an考查冠詞。后面的形容詞impressive是以元音開始的，所以使用an。故把a(bǔ)改為an

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