Question

假設你是新華中學的高三畢業(yè)生李華，剛剛參加完高考。最近聽說美籍華人李響出資幫助貧困大學生。請你根據以下要點寫一封資助申請信。

1．個人情況介紹；

2．申請資助原因(家庭困難情況)；

3．資助款的使用及今后打算。

注意：1．詞數：120—150(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)；

2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Mr．Li，

I’m had to hear that you will help those who are lacking_in money in going to college．I'm writing to apply for it.__________________________________________________________

 

 

 

 

 

 

Looking forward to your reply.

 

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mr. Li,

I'm glad to hear that you will help those who are lacking in money in going to college. I’m writing to apply for it.

My name is Li Hua, a senior three student of Xin Hua middle school. I have much financial difficulty in continuing my education to college but I’m eager to go on with my further study.

In my family my father is the only breadwinner while my mother was laid off two years ago. My grandmother has been suffering a lung illness for more than five years. My younger brother is now studying in a junior school. I took part-time jobs during the summer vacation, but what I have earned is far from enough for me to pay the required tuition fees. In order to continue my study, I have to apply for your help.

If my request is accepted, I will make good use of the money and put my heart into study and make myself a good man to society. I hope that you will consider my application.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇資助申請信類作文。假設你是新華中學的高三畢業(yè)生李華，剛剛參加完高考。最近聽說美籍華人李響出資幫助貧困大學生。請你根據以下要點寫一封資助申請信。要點如下1. 個人情況： 2．申請資助原因(家庭困難情況)；3．資助款的使用及今后打算。需要寫的內容已經粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，不能出現文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數120-150詞左右，(開頭已給出，不計入總詞數)。

【亮點說明】1.I am glad hear that you will help those who are lacking in money. 這里含有一個賓語從句和定語從句。2.what I have earned is farm from enough for me to pay something.這里使用了主語從句和far from遠非這個高級詞匯

考點：資助申請信類書面表達