Question

【題目】假設(shè)你是李華，你校的英國(guó)交換生Chris暑假要回國(guó)。他想要給他的好朋友買些有中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化特色的禮物，希望你能給他些建議。請(qǐng)給他回復(fù)一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示榮幸；

2. 你的建議及理由；

3. 購(gòu)物安排。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以便行文連貫；

3.結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。

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Best regards,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Chris,

I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions, and of course, I’ m willing to help.

When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends, first I think you should know the meanings behind. For example, paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses. And Chinese knots can also make a good present, for they are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.

Since we both will be free next Sunday, why don’t you let me accompany you to have a look at Hong Qiao Market on that day? We can meet at 9 in the morning at the school gate and go there by subway. Does it sound okay for you? Write to me before this Friday, will you?

Best regards,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。要求考生寫一封建議信，幫助其挑選中國(guó)禮物。

第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)用文

時(shí)態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

結(jié)構(gòu)：三段式

首段：點(diǎn)明主題；

中心段：提建議；

尾段：提供幫助。

第二步：列提綱

Be delighted to; be interested in;be willing to; when it comes to; express your best wishes;

the symbol of family reunion; in the eyes of us Chinese.

第三步：連詞成句

I’m very delighted to see you are interested in Chinese culture and traditions.

I’ m willing to help.

When it comes to choosing a traditional gift for your friends.

I think you should know the meanings behind.

Paper-cut is a good choice if you want to express your best wishes to the receivers or help them decorate their houses.

Chinese knots can also make a good present.

They are the symbol of family reunion, peace and love in the eyes of us Chinese.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進(jìn)行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時(shí)態(tài)問題。

第四步: 連句成篇 (銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對(duì)比關(guān)系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(從句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步: 潤(rùn)色修改