Question

【題目】Parents of teenagers will have heard something like this: Leave me alone or I told you, we didn’t do anything at school. Maybe they’ve had a door or two slammed on them. And maybe they feel that all of their interactions are arguments.

Sarah loves hanging out with her friends. That’s not surprising. Sarah is 16 and it’s typical for teenagers to spend time with their peers, especially their pals. So it makes sense when she gets mad about having to leave get-togethers with her friends early to meet her parents’ rule that she must stay at home after 9 p. m.

“Sometimes my parents don't let me do anything,” Sarah says. “It seems that their rules are for a 10-year-old child, not a 16-year-old one.” Sarah admits she often responds to her parents’ rules by openly complaining about them. And to get her pride again, she sometimes does what she wants behind her parents’ backs.

Sarah’s unwillingness to obey her parents may remind you of your own behavior toward your mom and dad. And the good news for young people is that it is normal for teens to rebel against their parents. “All teens go through a process of separating from their parents in order to gain some independence and a sense of identity,” says John Brightman, a child and adolescent psychologist. “Sometimes this process is accompanied by some anger, defiance(反抗), and eye-rolling. But this stage of shifting relationships is an important part of growing up.”

【寫作內(nèi)容】

1．以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；

2．然后以約120個詞談?wù)勀銓?/span>“青少年心理叛逆”的看法，內(nèi)容包括：

1）你認為青少年產(chǎn)生心理叛逆的原因；

2) 你熟悉的青少年典型叛逆期的行為表現(xiàn)；

3) 你是如何解決自己在叛逆期與父母之間的矛盾的。

【寫作要求】

1．在作文中可以使用自己親身的經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；

2．作文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，篇章連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】

1.As an adolescent, Sarah goes through an unavoidable but significant growing-up process of showing her personality and establishing independence by doing what will annoy her parents to rebel against them, which is a process of separating from their parents and is normal.

2.From my point of view, the reasons for teenagers becoming rebellious to parents are various, among which the need for freedom and independence are the most important ones. As children grow up, they think they are mature enough to make decisions and handle everything themselves. Therefore, they don’t want parents’ interference that makes them feel childlike and confined.

This passage reminds me of my own experience when I was in the rebellious period. At that time, I was unwilling to communicate with my parents no matter what happened. Very often, after I got home, I just shut my room’s door and wrote my diary. Gradually, feeling unusual, my parents began to act like enemies to stop me from going anywhere they thought inappropriate or unsafe. It was this conflict that made us involved in endless complains and quarrels with each other.

From then on, I am aware that it is no use rebelling against our parents and we must deal with this problem and improve the relationship between us. Firstly, we can discuss some interesting things as well as share our true feelings with our parents. Besides, we can also do homework and housework without being asked, which can make them happy. Last but not least, before going out, we should tell them where we are going and promise to go back early so that they will not worry about us. All in all, only if we respect and understand each other can we live harmoniously in a family.

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，1.以約30個詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容；要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，沒有增加與原文無關(guān)的信息，沒有照抄原文的句子。語言結(jié)構(gòu)正確，行文規(guī)范。2．然后談?wù)勀銓?/span>“青少年心理叛逆”的看法。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時，第一人稱和第三人稱。要求寫約120個詞，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級的詞匯和短語以及固定句式，注意句子結(jié)構(gòu)準確，信息內(nèi)容完整，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)連貫。

【亮點說明】 文中用了一些高級的短語和句式。如：what 引導的賓語從句、which 和among which引導的非限制性定語從句、interference 、was unwilling to 、it is no use doing、強調(diào)句句型等都很不錯。