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【題目】每到放學(xué)，家長(zhǎng)接學(xué)生的車輛總會(huì)導(dǎo)致校門口的交通過(guò)度擁擠，學(xué)校對(duì)此非�？鄲�。假如你是高二年級(jí)的學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，分析一下該現(xiàn)象產(chǎn)生的原因，并提出你的建議。

注意：120詞左右；開頭已給出，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。

Mr. Wang,

I’m writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

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Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Mr. Wang:

I'm writing to you to share my opinions about the problem of heavy traffic every day after school at our school gate.

With the development of economy, more and more families begin to have cars of their own, which contributes partly to the problem. Besides, some parents always try to park their cars as close as possible to the school gate, without taking anything else into consideration.

In order to solve it, I firmly hold the view that some effective measures must be taken. First, I think it necessary to call on all the students to go back home by bus or by bike. Second, if they have to be picked up by their parents by car, they'd better remind their parents to park their cars in proper places. Finally, it might be helpful to make students of different grades leave school at different times.

I hope my suggestions will be useful to help solve the problem.

Best wishes!

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

本文屬于半開放性作文。要求分析放學(xué)時(shí)學(xué)校門口擁擠的原因，并提出之間的建議。屬于議論文性質(zhì)，所以使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和第三人稱。

要點(diǎn)：校門口擁堵的原因：1.越來(lái)越多的家庭擁有汽車；2.很多家長(zhǎng)總是把車停在靠近校門口的地方，不考慮別人的感受；解決的方法：1.號(hào)召家距離學(xué)校不遠(yuǎn)的學(xué)生步行或者騎自行車回家；2.提醒父母親有序停車。3.錯(cuò)開放學(xué)的時(shí)間；

本文在分析原因的時(shí)候和列舉解決方法的時(shí)候都要使用議論文常有的方法，要特別注意連詞的使用。同時(shí)要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句式。