Question

短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Last summer, I was working at home a sunny day. For some reasons I went around to the front of the house to get anything. As I did so, I feel drops of rain on my face, that soon developed into a heavy shower. A few minute later, I went to the back of the house but realized that it was not raining at all there. It was raining only at the front and not at the back. I stood in the hallway, look one way––heavy rain and the another way––sunny and dry. Soon, the rain stopped complete. Up until then, I’d never seen such a strange weather.

 

Answer 1

1.a前加on

2.anyting-something

3.feel-felt

4.that-which

5.minute–minutes

6.but–and

7.look –looking

8.another-other

9.complete – completely

10.去掉a

【解析】

試題分析：在去年夏天一個陽光明媚的天氣里作者在家工作，由于某種原因，作者到房前拿東西，天下起了雨，慢慢變成大雨。幾分鐘后，作者到房子后面時發(fā)現(xiàn)那邊一點都沒下雨。不久，雨就完全停了。作者最后說這是他以前從未見過如此奇怪的天氣。

1.a前加on 考查介詞。a sunny day 陽光明媚的一天，指在具體某一天，應(yīng)用介詞on。由I was working at home a sunny day.描述可知a sunny day在此做時間狀語，所以前面要加表示具體某一天的介詞on。

2. 考查不定代詞。anyting用于疑問句或否定句，something用于肯定句。For some reasons I went around to the front of the house to get anything.這是一個肯定句，故把anyting改為something。

3. 考查動詞時態(tài)。由文章開頭Last summer,以及通讀全文可知都是用一般過去時態(tài)，I feel drops of rain on my face，是描述過去那一天的事情，也應(yīng)用一般過去時態(tài)，故把feel改為felt。

4.that-which考查非限制性定語從句。I feel drops of rain on my face, that soon developed into a heavy shower.我感到雨滴滴到我的臉上，不久就變成一場大雨。前面主句與后面從句用逗號隔開，說明從句是非限制性定語從句。非限制性定語從句應(yīng)用which來引導(dǎo)，that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。故把that改為which。

5.minute–minutes考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)。A few minute later, A few意思是“一些”，后跟可數(shù)名詞的復(fù)數(shù)形式。故把minute 改為minutes。

6.but–and 考查連詞辨析。I went to the back of the house but realized that it was not raining at all there.我走到房子的后面，發(fā)現(xiàn)那根本沒下雨。went 和realized兩個動作表示意思順承，要用連詞and連接，不能用表轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的連詞but. 故把but改為and。

7.look –looking 考查動詞現(xiàn)在分詞用法。I stood in the hallway, look one way……，現(xiàn)在分詞looking作狀語，與主語I為邏輯上的主動關(guān)系，是謂語動詞stood的伴隨動作，表示與stood動作同時發(fā)生。故把look 改為looking。

8.another-other 考查固定短語。……one way––heavy rain and the another way…… 固定短語：one……the other…… （兩者中）一個……，另一個……，在此表示房前下雨的一面和房后陽光明媚干燥的另一面，只有這兩面。another指三者或三者以上的任意的另一個，表泛指。故把s another改為other。

9.complete - completely 考查副詞用法。the rain stopped complete. stopped是動詞，修飾動詞應(yīng)該用副詞形式，complete是形容詞，completely是副詞。故把complete改為completely。

10. 考查不可數(shù)名詞。I’d never seen such a strange weather. 我從未見過如此奇怪的天氣。weather 天氣，是不可數(shù)名詞，不可數(shù)名詞前不能加冠詞。故去掉a。

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