Question

13．請根據(jù)內(nèi)容提示，用英語以"Life in Senior"為題寫一篇短文，敘述你的高中生活．
內(nèi)容提示：
★總體印象：激動、快樂、辛苦．
★實際生活：時間緊，常熬夜；作業(yè)多，考試多；設(shè)法放松，看書打球；克服困難，不斷進(jìn)步
★展望未來：充滿信心．
要求：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右．可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫，但不能逐字翻譯．
　　　  2．書寫工整規(guī)范．

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于半開放性作文，指是給出文章所要討論的主要話題-高中生活．文字提示較少，要求考生進(jìn)行合理的謀篇布局，運(yùn)用合適的連接詞對各要點之間進(jìn)行串聯(lián)，寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化．
亮點部分 本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：far from遠(yuǎn)不，遠(yuǎn)非；To our delight 令我們高興的是；with the help of the teachers在老師的幫助之下；make full use of充分利用； Besides另外；made constant and great progress取得持續(xù)的巨大的進(jìn)步

解答 Life in Senior
Life in Senior is both tiring，exciting and meaningful．As everyone knows，Senior is far from relaxing and easy．（高分句型）Every minute counts．Working late at night is often the case．There is much homework and we have to take many exams such as monthly exams．（高分句型）We have to meet with and overcome a lot of difficulties in our studies．To our delight，we have made constant and great progress with the help of the teachers．（高分句型）Besides，our lessons of course we also manage to make full use of free time to relax ourselves girls reading colorful magazines and boys playing basketball．Though we are busy and tired，we still feel happy and confident of our future．（高分句型）

點評 本文屬于半開放性作文，動筆前，一定要組織要點，理解要點要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點，跑題偏題．平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．