Question

18．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間 交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
    刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
    修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞．
    注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
I couldn't believe my eye when I opened the front door．Everything was in a terrible mess：the books were lying on the floor but the drawers were open．Realised that my house had been broken into，I telephoned the police at once．They had told me to keep calm and not to touch anything．Then I decided take a look around at what had been stolen．The TV was still there and so did the computers．Everything in my bedroom seemed to be complete untouched．I was confused as nothing was missing．Suddenly，there was a knock to the door and my sister was standing there with his naughty boy．Oh，I could guess which had happened．

Answer 1

分析 本文講述了作者回家發(fā)現(xiàn)家里一團(tuán)糟，以為進(jìn)了小偷便打電話報(bào)了警，然而作者卻發(fā)現(xiàn)家里的東西都沒有丟，原來是姐姐帶著淘氣的兒子來家里了．

解答 I couldn't believe my eye when I opened the front door．Everything was in a terrible mess：the books were lying on the floor but the drawers were open．Realised that my house had been broken into，I telephoned the police at once．They had told me to keep calm and not to touch anything．Then I decided∧take a look around at what had been stolen．The TV was still there and so did the computers．Everything in my bedroom seemed to be complete untouched．I was confused as nothing was missing．Suddenly，there was a knock to the door and my sister was standing there with his naughty boy．Oh，I could guess which had happened．
詳解：
1．eye改為eyes；考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)，根據(jù)句意"我不能相信我的眼睛"可知此處要用復(fù)數(shù)形式eyes．
2．but改為and；考查連詞，結(jié)合語境分析此處上下文之間是并列關(guān)系，而非轉(zhuǎn)折，故用and．
3．realised改為realising；考查分詞作狀語，主語I與動(dòng)詞realise是主謂關(guān)系，故用現(xiàn)在分詞形式作狀語．
4．去掉had；考查動(dòng)詞的時(shí)態(tài)，這里陳述過去的一個(gè)事實(shí)情況，要用一般過去時(shí)．
5．decided后面加to；考查動(dòng)詞的不定式，decide to do 是固定搭配，意為"決定做某事"．
6．did改為were；考查并列成分，這是一個(gè)and連接的并列結(jié)構(gòu)，前面用的是系動(dòng)詞was，所以后面也要用系動(dòng)詞，主語為computers，故用復(fù)數(shù)were，這里是倒裝句．
7．complete改為completely；考查副詞，此處用副詞作狀語修飾untouched．
8．to改為at；考查介詞，knock at the door是固定搭配，意為"敲門"．
9．his改為her；考查形容詞性物主代詞，此處的物主代詞應(yīng)與前面的my sister保持一致，故用her．
10．which改為what；考查名詞性從句，這是賓語從句，這里用疑問代詞what在從句中作主語．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 首先要通讀全文，了解大意，抓住上下文語境所提供的信息，仔細(xì)分析帶空格的句子，明確空格所要填的詞義，詞型和短語搭配，給出所要填的正確形式，然后整體閱讀短文，核對(duì)答案．