Question

【題目】【改編】假定你是李華。請(qǐng)你給筆友Jack寫(xiě)封信，告訴他你姐姐恩雅將去他所在城市上大學(xué)，帶去他想要的那件中國(guó)瓷器，同時(shí)詢(xún)問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明：

恩雅：高個(gè)子，偏瘦，穿黃色裙子，戴眼鏡

航班號(hào)：CA988

到達(dá)：9月6日上午11:30

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫;

3. 開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好。

Dear Jack,

How are you doing?

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Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

I’m writing to tell you that my sister Anya is going to your city to register for college, and I’ve asked her to bring you the set of china which you’ve asked for before。

Also, I’d like you to do me a favor. Would you please meet my sister at the airport and take her to her college since this is her first visit to the U.S.? Thank you in advance!

Her flight number is CA988, and it will arrive at 11:30 am, September 6. My sister is tall and thin ,she is wearing glasses. And she will be in a yellow dress。

Looking forward to your reply。

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：分析要求可知，請(qǐng)你給筆友Jack寫(xiě)封信，告訴他你姐姐恩雅將去他所在城市上大學(xué)，帶去他想要的那件中國(guó)瓷器，同時(shí)詢(xún)問(wèn)他是否可以接機(jī)。信中還需說(shuō)明：

恩雅：高個(gè)子，偏瘦，穿黃色裙子，戴眼鏡 航班號(hào)：CA988 到達(dá)：9月6日上午11:30。短文應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，第一人稱(chēng)。詞數(shù)100左右，不要太多或太少。盡量多使用較高級(jí)的詞匯和短語(yǔ)以及固定句式，注意句子之間的連貫性。作文打分重點(diǎn)關(guān)注文體，篇章結(jié)構(gòu)，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)的連貫性和地道性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】 文中用了一些高級(jí)的短語(yǔ)和句式。如：register for、which引導(dǎo)的限制性定語(yǔ)從句，since引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)句等都很不錯(cuò)。