1.假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文.文中共有10處語言錯(cuò)誤,每句中最多有兩處.每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改.
增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(∧),并在其下面寫出該加的詞.
刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(﹨)劃掉.
修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下畫一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞.
注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分.
When young,I looked forward to my birthday all year.My friends and family made me feel like the most special person in world.The night before my birthday,my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping.They hang balloons on my walls.When I woke up,I was always surprising!
Although my birthday was on a school day,I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates.While I was having my party at our house,my parents were made up lots of fun game to play.When I got old,my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting.
The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday,meaning  I had to wait another whole year before it came again.

分析 文章大意:本文主要講述了作者小時(shí)候過生日的回憶.父母會(huì)悄悄送禮物,給我一個(gè)驚喜,我也經(jīng)常把禮物帶到學(xué)校和老師同學(xué)分享.對我來說最悲傷的一天是生日后的一天,因?yàn)槟且馕吨疫要等一年,下一個(gè)生日才能到來.

解答 When young,I looked forward to my birthday all year.My friends and family

made me feel like the most special person in∧world.The night before my birthday,
                                                                  the
my parents moved careful into my bedroom while I was sleeping.They hang balloons on my walls.
                           carefully                                                                hung
When I woke up,I was always surprising!
                                               surprised
    Although my birthday was on a school day,I brought in treats to share with my teachers and classmates.While I was having my party at our house,my parents
     If
were  made up lots of fun game to play.When I got old,my parents let my friends and I stay up all night watching movies and chatting.
                                      games                              older                                            me
    The saddest day of the year for me was the day before my birthday,meaning  I had to wait another whole year before it came again.
                                                                          after

1.在in world之間加the.考查冠詞.在這個(gè)世界上,應(yīng)該用in the world.
2.careful-carefully.考查副詞.修飾動(dòng)詞moved 應(yīng)該用副詞
3.hang-hung.考查時(shí)態(tài).從上下文可知,本文回憶過去的事情,所以這里應(yīng)該用一般過去時(shí).
4.surprising-surprised.考查形容詞的適當(dāng)形式.主語是I,所以表語應(yīng)該用surprised.
5.Although-If考查連詞.句意為:如果我的生日是在上學(xué)期間,我就會(huì)把禮物帶到學(xué)校和老師和同學(xué)分享.
6.去掉made up前面的were.考查語態(tài).本句中是主動(dòng)語態(tài),意思是我的父母會(huì)編很多游戲,所以去掉be動(dòng)詞.
7.game-games.考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù).前面有a  lot of 修飾,game是可數(shù)名詞,所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式.
8.old-older.考查形容詞的適當(dāng)形式.當(dāng)我年齡再大一點(diǎn),所以應(yīng)該用形容詞的比較級.
9.I-me.考查人稱代詞.此處做let的賓語,所以應(yīng)該用賓格.
10.before-after.考查介詞搭配.根據(jù)句意應(yīng)該是在生日后盼望下一個(gè)生日,所以用after.

點(diǎn)評 改錯(cuò)題要注意代詞,連詞以及詞性、人稱的轉(zhuǎn)化.
做好短文改錯(cuò)題,可以從以下三方面去考慮:1.快速閱讀短文,如抓住中心思想,從整體上對短文有個(gè)了解. 2.充分運(yùn)用語言的基礎(chǔ)知識,從句型結(jié)構(gòu)、詞的變化、詞類選擇、詞的搭配、習(xí)慣用法出發(fā),進(jìn)行分析判斷,盡快找出錯(cuò)誤在何處. 3.重視整體和語境,從上下文關(guān)系中找出表達(dá)連接關(guān)系或邏輯關(guān)系的詞或詞組,判斷是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系還是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,是因果關(guān)系還是讓步關(guān)系.

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