Question

【題目】短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除；把多余的詞 用斜線（\）劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

Dear editor,

I am writing to you to talk about the heavy traffic. Nowadays, people in many big cities are complaining the heavy traffic. It has serious influenced people’s daily life and economic development. To solve the problem, I’d like to put forward some advices.

For one thing, more streets and roads should be built. In this way, we can speed up the flow of buses and cars. For other, the number of bikes and cars can be limited, that can decrease the traffic flow. But the most important thing is what the number of private cars should be put under the control. Meanwhile, buses should have its own special routes which cannot be using by other vehicles. Therefore, underground train and city train should be developed quickly.

I do hope my suggestions will be taken.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】complaining后面加about

【2】serious→seriously

【3】advices→advice

【4】other→another

【5】that→which

【6】what→that

【7】under后面的the去掉

【8】its→their

【9】using→used

【10】Therefore→Besides/Moreover

【解析】

【1】complaining后面加about 考查動詞短語。complain about抱怨……。

【2】serious→seriously 考查副詞。seriously用來修飾動詞influenced。

【小題3】advices→advice 考查名詞。advice是不可數(shù)名詞，沒有復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把advices改為advice。

【4】other→another 考查固定句型。For one thing..., for another...一方面……，另一方面……；是固定句型，故把other改為another。

【5】that→which 考查定語從句。that不能引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句，根據(jù)這里指代前面一句話，故改為which，which可以引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句。

【6】what→that 考查表語從句。句意：但最重要的是事情是私家車的數(shù)量應(yīng)該得到控制。從句意思完整，在句中不作成分，故要把what改為that。

【7】under后面的the去掉 考查固定短語。under control處在控制之下。

【8】its→their 考查代詞。句意：同時，公交車有他們自己的專線，這是其它機(jī)動車所不能使用的。與主語buses一致，故把its改為their。

【9】using→used 考查被動語態(tài)。根據(jù)后面by可知，這里用被動語態(tài)，故把using改為used。

【10】Therefore→Besides/Moreover 考查副詞。句意：除此以外，地鐵和城鐵也應(yīng)該被快速發(fā)展。與原文不是因果關(guān)系，而是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，故把Therefore改為Besides/Moreover。