Question

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最近，某知名英語學(xué)習(xí)網(wǎng)站就網(wǎng)站的使用性能、信息面等問題向用戶征求改進(jìn)意見。假定你是張明，請你根據(jù)表格中的提示將你的問題和意見以電子郵件的形式提交給該網(wǎng)站。

發(fā)現(xiàn)的問題 網(wǎng)上信息更新不是很快；網(wǎng)頁形式不夠多樣

提出的建議：多收集純正英文原版文章；增加視頻和圖片使網(wǎng)頁更加有吸引力

注意：1．詞數(shù)120-150；

2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

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解析：

　　Dear Sir or Madam,

　　I抦 very grateful that your website gives me a lot of help in my English study．As a user, I like it very much．However, I also find some problems that need to be improved．

　　First of all, I suggest that the information on your website should be updated in time, so it can be more helpful to the users．Maybe more authentic essays are needed．Secondly, I think the contents should be varied so that the website can attract more users．For example, you can add more videos and pictures．

　　I am looking forward to seeing your improvement and hope your website will be more and more popular．

Yours,

Zhang Ming