Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號（/\)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\ )劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線（一），并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。
During the last summer holiday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we chatted happily and enjoyed beautifully views. At first, we saw one hill after other. Then which came into view were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents; house. Ti red as I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents, whom I haven't seen for a long time. It was really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken such a long-distance train.

Answer 1

【答案】pay后面加a；was錯誤，改為were；baggages錯誤，改為baggage；beautifully錯誤，改為beautiful；other錯誤，改為another；which錯誤，改為what；In錯誤，改為After；去掉but；haven't錯誤，改為 hadn't；excited錯誤，改為exciting
【解析】①pay后面加a 考查固定短語。Pay a visit to 拜訪；
②was錯誤，改為were 考查主謂一致。主語是a large number of people，謂語動詞用復數(shù)形式；
③baggages錯誤，改為baggage 考查名詞。Baggage是不可數(shù)名詞；
④beautifully錯誤，改為beautiful 考查形容詞。形容詞用來修飾名詞views.
⑤other錯誤，改為another 考查代詞。One after anther 一個接一個；
⑥which錯誤，改為what 考查主語從句。句意：進入視野的是綠色的莊稼。
⑦In錯誤，改為After考查介詞 。句意：六個小時的旅行之后，我們到達 了外婆家；
⑧去掉but考查連詞。As在句子已經(jīng)表示雖然，英語中沒有but；
⑨haven't錯誤，改為hadn't 考查動詞的時態(tài)。根據(jù)I was happy to see my grandparents可知發(fā)生在過去，沒有見面這個動作發(fā)生在過去的過去，用過去完成時；
⑩excited錯誤，改為 exciting 考查形容詞。excited 用來修飾人，exciting用來修飾物；