Question

第三部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分30分）

 第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及—個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A )，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞； 2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Kate was always unhappy about her figure, but she didn't know how to lose the weight. One day, she went to consulting a doctor. The doctor ad?vised her to have a balancing diet and exercise more. So her parents were both busy earning their living and couldn't provide Kate a healthy diet. She often ate fast food who contained too much fat. She knew she ought to eat more vegetables and fruits that were good for her healthy. Luckily, two weeks late, with the help of the doctor, Kate became thinner. He was very happy and became more confidence about herself.

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