Question

每個人都行走在自己的路上, 有著不同的經(jīng)歷和收獲。請你以“On my way to…”為題寫一篇英語作文，向?qū)W校英語報投稿，要求包括以下內(nèi)容：

1. 敘述在路上你的經(jīng)歷；

2. 談談你的收獲和感想。

注意：

1. ）詞數(shù)100詞左右。

2. ）文中不能出現(xiàn)可能透露考生真實身份的任何信息。

Answer 1

（1）On my way to school

As a Senior 3 student, I am punctual for every class but an unexpected thing that happened yesterday morning changes it.

It was cold so every pedestrian rushed to their destination, including me. When arriving at the school gate, I found it was 2 minutes before the class began. I was heading for my classroom hurriedly when I saw an old man fall down. He looked helpless. Something in my heart urged me to help him out and not until his son came did I leave for my classroom. Of course, I was late but I didn’t regret.

I believe that a world full of love depends on all of us. Only by assisting each other can we enjoy a more pleasant life.

（2） On my way to achieving my dream

Every one has a dream and we are on the way to achieving it whether the way is smooth or tough.

As a Senior 3 student, I have the same dream as my peers that I can be admitted to an ideal university. In the past three years, I have done everything I can to equip myself with what I have learnt from my teachers. Not only have I enjoyed the pleasure of study but also I have got closer to my dream. Of course, anxiety and pressure did discourage me but with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I made it.

I’m sure that I still have a long way to go to achieve my dream. No matter how difficult it is, I will have it come true. As the proverb says, “ Where there ’s a will, there’s a way.”

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文，要求以O(shè)n my way to…為題寫一篇短文。根據(jù)提示的信息可知，文章應寫成記敘文或議論文。文章用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時為主，敘述過去的事情時要用一般過去時。寫作時要充分發(fā)揮想象，適當?shù)奶砑幼约旱挠^點，使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，并達到要求的字數(shù)。此外，為了提高文章檔次，還要注意使用多種句式和高級詞匯，并添加關(guān)聯(lián)詞讓行文流暢。

【亮點說明】本篇書面表達格式規(guī)范，語言流暢。第一段開門見山地提出文章的主題；第二段介紹了自己的經(jīng)歷；第三段描寫了自己的收獲和感想。本文的亮點是運用了復雜的句式如定語從句，賓語從句的、被動語態(tài)等，提升了文章的檔次；not only ...but also 、no matter how...... 、only by doing sth.等結(jié)構(gòu)的運用也為文章增添了亮色。

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