Question

2．Directions：Write an English composition in 120-150words according to the instructions given below in Chinese．
假設(shè)你班班長打算在寒假組織一次班級活動，有三種方案：
一、慈善義賣幫助家庭有困難的同學(xué)；
二、聘請英語專家介紹有效的學(xué)習(xí)方法；
三、組織一次班級新年派對．作為班級的一員，請你根據(jù)你的實際情況，在三項方案中選擇其一，提出對該項活動的建議并談?wù)劺碛桑�你的寫作中必須包括�?br />在三項方案中選擇其一；
對該方案提出建議；
談?wù)勀闾岢鼋ㄗh的理由．
Recently，whathas become a heated topic of our class is that an important decision about thecoming winter festival event must be made among three different choices．Aftera careful consideration，the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor．
Several suggestions about the partyare listed as follows．Firstly，a clear and absorbing theme must be settled．Only with a specific theme，such as Welcoming the New Ourselves or Changes inthe New Year，can we eventually work out the suitable activities anddecorations．Besides，a proper schedule and a name list arenecessary．In other words，when to hold the party and who will attend it aresure to make a big difference in its evolving purpose and，more importantly，the success．Last but not least，about the expense，any amount of money wespend shall be listed，through which we can better control the whole processand make full use of the resources we have．
From what has been mentioned above，if allthese suggestions can be carried out strictly，it is no surprise that our NewYear Party will leave a deep impression on everyone．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提綱作文，根據(jù)所提供的材料，寫一短文，就寒假組織的班級活動的三種方案中進行選擇，提出建議并闡述理由．寫作要點包括：1．選擇哪一種班級活動方案；2．提出建議；3．闡述理由．寫作時應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主．人稱以第一人稱和第三人稱為主．重要短語：a heated topic （一個熱門話題），as follows（如下），work out （解決），makea big difference （起作用，產(chǎn)生影響），make full use of （充分利用），carry out （實施，執(zhí)行），leave a deep impression on everyone （給每個人留下深刻印象）．

解答 Recently，whathas become a heated topic of our class is that an important decision about thecoming winter festival event must be made among three different choices．Aftera careful consideration，the proposal to hold a New Year Party earns my favor．（選擇組織班級新年派對）
        Several suggestions about the partyare listed as follows．Firstly，a clear and absorbing theme must be settled．Only with a specific theme，such as Welcoming the New Ourselves or Changes inthe New Year，can we eventually work out the suitable activities anddecorations．【高分句型】Besides，a proper schedule and a name list are necessary．In other words，whento hold the party and who will attend it are sure to make a big difference inits evolving purpose and，more importantly，the success．【高分句型】Last but not least，about the expense，any amountof money we spend shall be listed，through which we can better control thewhole process and make the full use of the resources we have．【高分句型】（提出建議并陳述理由）
        From what has been mentioned above，if allthese suggestions can be carried out strictly，it is no surprise that our NewYear Party will leave a deep impression on everyone．（結(jié)尾總結(jié)）

點評 提綱作文在寫作時要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點，并適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)．寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時需注意積累短語和重要句型．