Question

【題目】閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。

A peacock was very unhappy with his ugly voice; and he spent most of his days complaining about it.

"It is true that you cannot sing;" said the fox, "but look how beautiful you are!"

"0h，but what good is all this beauty;" cried the bird, "with such an unpleasant voice!"

"Listen," said the fox, "each one owns something good: You have such beauty; the nightingale has his song; and the owl has his eyes. Even if you had a sweet voice, you would still complain about another thing. Why can't you just be happy about what you have already got?"

【寫作內容】

1.以約30個詞概括短文的主要內容。

2.以約120個詞就“停止抱怨并珍惜自己所擁有的“這一主題發(fā)表你的看法，內容包括：

（l）你或你身邊的人的類似事例；

(2）談談你對該主題的看法。

【寫作要求】

1.作文中可以使用自己的親身經歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容，但不得

直接引用原文中的句子：

2.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實姓名和學校名稱。

【評分標準】

概括準確，語言規(guī)范，內容合適，語篇連貫。

Answer 1

【答案】Ths story is about a peacock who comptalned about h1S ugty yoke whiie actualty he s very beautiful A fox ad ised him to be content with what he was blessed with

The peaco ck reminds of my friend Mikewho is always upt. He complained his parents are too busy to stay at home with him , He complains he is too short to play basketball well. But he never realizes that his parents love him so much,and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the of his classmates

Many people arotmd us focus on what they want instead of what they have. As a result of their endless desires they are often dissatistíed. In my opinionwe should stay positive and value what we have instead of complaining too much. If we remain grateful for what we already have and what we can fulfill, we may live a happier life.

【解析】本文是讀寫任務型寫作，這類作文可按照“三段式”模板寫：第一段：概括所給短文要點；第二段：過渡詞引出主題句—闡述理由或列舉事例；第三段：個人觀點，特別要注意第一段的概括，用自己的語言概括，不能照搬原文。

時態(tài)一般用一般過去時或一般現(xiàn)在時。人稱以第一和第三人稱為主。

亮點句子：

This story is about a peacock who complained about h1S ugly yoke while actuality he s very beautiful.這里是由who引導的定語從句，先行詞是a peacock，who在定語從句中作主語。

The peacock reminds of my friend Mike who is always upset.這里是由who引導的非限制性定語從句，who在定語從句中作主語。

But he never realizes that his parents love him so much, and how beautifully he can play the violin, which makes him the of his classmates.

這里是由that和how引導的賓語從句，作動詞realize的賓語。

由which引導的非限制性定語從句，which在定語從句中作主語，指代前面整個主句的內容。