【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文,請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。作文中共有10處語言錯誤,每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加:在缺詞處加一個漏子符號(∧)并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除:在錯的詞下劃一橫線,并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意: 1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞; 2. 只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計分。
I took our foreign teacher Mr. Brown, he came to China for the first time, to the Great Wall in last weekend. Having told about the history of the Great Wall, he was amazing at this world wonder. He was struck by the beautiful of the Great Wall. So I took photo of him, which would be a good memory for him. At the top, Mr. Brown was very interested in the activity of protecting the environment that he was eager to join in and then sign his name. Both the Great Wall or the Chinese people deep impressed him. He decided to visit more places of interest when free.

【答案】①he→who②去掉in③Having后加been④amazing→amazed⑤beautiful→beauty⑥photo→photos⑦very→so⑧sign→signed⑨or→and⑩deep→deeply


【解析】

（1）he→who 如果he came to China for the first time是個獨立的句子，因為與前一句用逗號隔開，必須要有連詞連接，但這里沒有，可見是從句。Mr. Brown作先行詞，后面是非限制性定語從句，故把he改為who。

（2）去掉in last weekend在周末，前面不需要加介詞，故去掉in。

（3）Having后加been 此處是現(xiàn)在分詞的完成式的被動式作時間狀語，故在having后加been。

（4）amazing→amazed 句意：他對世界的奇跡感到驚訝。表示“感到驚訝”，修飾人，故把amazing改為amazed。

（5）beautiful→beauty 此處指長城的美。前面有冠詞修飾，故可知用名詞形式，故把beautiful改為beauty。

（6）photo→photos 句意：因此我給他拍照。take photos拍照。故把photo改為photos。

（7）very→so 固定結(jié)構(gòu)：so...that...如此……以致于……。故把very改為so。

（8）sign→signed 句意：他渴望加入，然后簽了他的名字。動作發(fā)生在過去，故用一般過去時態(tài)，故把sign改為signed。

（9）or→and 固定搭配：both...and兩個都……。故把or改為and。

（10）deep→deeply 副詞修飾動詞，故把deep改為deeply。

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