Question

15．假定你是李華，你的關(guān)國網(wǎng)友Tom上周因媽媽感冒而缺席了很多課．就此請你用英語給他寫封郵件，主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）表達(dá)看法；
（2）打聽近況；
（3）給出建議．
注意：
（1）詞數(shù)100左右；
（2）可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
（3）開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Tom，
I'm sorry to hear that your mother caught a cold last week．As a son，it's normal to worry about your mother when she is ill．However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）
Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）Has she recovered from the illness？In addition，please tell me if you have gone to school．You may have some questions about the lessons you missed．I hope you can deal with them well．
Finally，I have some suggestions to share with you．Firstly，do your own things well even though there is something that disturbs you．As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）Secondly，look after your mother if you have your homework finished．
Best wishes．I'm looking forward to your reply．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息用英語給網(wǎng)友Tom寫封郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確幾個要點(diǎn)：（1）表達(dá)看法；（2）打聽近況；（3）給出建議． 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：worry about 擔(dān)心；However然而；In addition另外；deal with 應(yīng)對，處理；Finally最后；As you know正如你所知；
However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）句中that是同位語從句，it在句中作形式主語
Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）句中what作賓語從句
As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）句中as屬于引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句，studying屬于動名詞作主語

解答 Dear Tom，
      I'm sorry to hear that your mother caught a cold last week．As a son，it's normal to worry about your mother when she is ill．However，it was an unwise action that you were absent from class just because of the worry．（高分句型一）
      Now，I can't wait to know what's going on with your mother．（高分句型二）Has she recovered from the illness？In addition，please tell me if you have gone to school．You may have some questions about the lessons you missed．I hope you can deal with them well．
      Finally，I have some suggestions to share with you．Firstly，do your own things well even though there is something that disturbs you．As you know，studying well is the best medicine for your mother．（高分句型三）Secondly，look after your mother if you have your homework finished．
      Best wishes I'm looking forward to your reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．