Question

11．假如你是李華，你的好友龍龍來(lái)信說(shuō)他在高中英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)過(guò)程中遇到一些困難，英語(yǔ)考試成績(jī)不理想，感到很苦惱．希望你就如何學(xué)好英語(yǔ)給他提些建議，要求內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)．
1．利用課余時(shí)間多聽(tīng)多讀以增加詞匯量；
2．熟練掌握每模塊的重要句型；
3．一旦遇到疑難問(wèn)題多與老師同學(xué)交流．
4．不向困難屈服
5．詞數(shù)在120左右．（首尾句已給出不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．）
參考詞匯：句型sentence patterns  熟練掌握 have a good command of
溫馨提示：（1）文章要分段； （2）文章內(nèi)容要包括這些詞組：增加詞匯量； 熟練掌握； 與老師同學(xué)交流； 不屈服； （3）可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容使行文流暢．
Dear Longlong，
I'm sorry to learn that you are feeling sad because you have some difficulty in learning English．What's worse，you do badly in the English exams．I'd like to give you some advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型一）
Firstly，you should make full use of your spare time to do more listening and reading about English to increase vocabulary．It's widely believed that practice makes perfect．（高分句型二）Secondly，if you want to improve your writing，you should have a good command of important sentence patterns of each unit．Thirdly，once you come across problems，you can turn to your teachers and classmates for help．Lastly，never give in to any difficulties．Only in this way can you learn English well．（高分句型三）
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
Best wishes
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 考查提綱類短文寫作．本文的中心思想是希望對(duì)方提出一些高中英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的建議，要點(diǎn)在文字提示部分都已經(jīng)給了出來(lái)，考生要做的就是把他們翻譯成英語(yǔ)．在寫作的過(guò)程指要選擇適當(dāng)高級(jí)的自己能夠駕馭的詞匯和句型來(lái)提高文章的層次；【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：同時(shí)運(yùn)用合適的連接詞把文章連接成一個(gè)整體，for one thing，for another； besides，firstly，secondly，last but not least等．
I'd like to give you some advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型一）
It's widely believed that practice makes perfect．（高分句型二）
Only in this way can you learn English well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Longlong，
    I'm sorry to learn that you are feeling sad because you have some difficulty in learning English．What's worse，you do badly in the English exams．I'd like to give you some advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型一）
    Firstly，you should make full use of your spare time to do more listening and reading about English to increase vocabulary．It's widely believed that practice makes perfect．（高分句型二）Secondly，if you want to improve your writing，you should have a good command of important sentence patterns of each unit．Thirdly，once you come across problems，you can turn to your teachers and classmates for help．Lastly，never give in to any difficulties．Only in this way can you learn English well．（高分句型三）
    I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
    Best wishes
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  LiHua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文屬于提綱類短文，在動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．