Question

 

Dear friends,

It is real a good chance to have met all of you here. We have spent several precious weekend in learning in the English Club．As we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．That is because we are all very much active and the activities are not only enjoyable and also helpful．Besides, the foreign teachers here work hard and try his best to make the activities lively and interested．I am very pleased to say that all of us greatly improved our spoken English so far．I am looking forward to see all of you again in the near future!

 

Answer 1

第一行：real改為really ；　 weekend改為weekends　

第二行：As改為Though / Although / While　 ； a great progress 前面的a去掉

第三行：much去掉　 ；　 and改為but

第四行：his改為their　 ；　 interested改為interesting　

第五行：greatly前加have　 ； see改為seeing

 

第一行：修飾動詞：be（is）應(yīng)該使用副詞：really；前面受：several修飾，另外weekend屬于可數(shù)名詞，所以應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)：weekends。

第二行：句子：As we have been members for a short period of time, we have made a great progress．中前后屬于讓步關(guān)系，所以把a(bǔ)s改為though / although / while，還因為：as表示：雖然時候需要倒裝；progress屬于不可數(shù)名詞，所以前面不能出現(xiàn)不定冠詞：a

第三行：修飾形容詞：active只需用程度副詞：very，所以much多余，應(yīng)該去掉；屬于not only、、、but also、、、的固定結(jié)構(gòu)，所以把：and改為but

第四行：此處代指：the foreign teachers應(yīng)該使用復(fù)數(shù)：their；修飾：the activities使用：interesting表示：令人感興趣；

第五行：分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知應(yīng)該使用完成時態(tài)：have greatly improved our spoken English ；短語動詞：look forward to中to屬于介詞，后需要接：doing結(jié)構(gòu)，所以把see改為seeing。