人人渴望幸福，但由于忙于學(xué)業(yè)或工作，我們忽視了幸福。你認(rèn)為幸福是什么？結(jié)合生活中的事例闡述你對幸福的理解。

 

 

 

 

 

 

It can’t be denied that nowadays, our pace of life is so fast that we often neglect the real happiness. We are buried in books and work which seems to be endless. From my point of view, happiness lies in every little thing that happens in our daily life.

I can still remember the cold night when my mother and I were on the way to the shop to buy my clothes. Suddenly, an old lady selling flowers beside the street caught our eye, and my mother stopped. Then, she asked whether I was willing to turn my new clothes into a kind of help. I was only 5 years old then, but I nodded, although I didn’t know the real meaning of his words. Only after she bought all the flowers from the old lady did I realize that we helped her. I didn’t regret losing my clothes but felt very happy because I thought I had given the old lady warmth on such a cold winter.

Happiness is not the material satisfaction but the exact feeling of warmth, love and care from other people. Happiness is available to everyone. It only calls for a kind smile and a friendly hand. Everyone is a part of society. It’s our duty and pleasure to help those who are in trouble, and in turn will get happiness.

【解析】

試題分析：1. 仔細(xì)審題。根據(jù)寫作任務(wù)，要求學(xué)生認(rèn)真審讀提綱，領(lǐng)會(huì)意圖，捕捉信息，確定文章時(shí)態(tài)及體裁。2. 撰寫提綱。構(gòu)思文章要點(diǎn)，寫出每個(gè)段落主題句、關(guān)鍵詞，然后確定細(xì)節(jié)和內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。3. 簡寫初稿。經(jīng)過審題和列提綱后，開始寫作，有意識(shí)地使用固定句型、關(guān)聯(lián)詞，把段落按邏輯順序連成一體，形成基本連貫的初稿。復(fù)查是書面表達(dá)不可缺少的環(huán)節(jié)。要檢查（1）要點(diǎn)是否齊全，有無遺漏。（2）內(nèi)容是否連貫，有無缺詞。（3）語法是否正確，人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、語態(tài)、名詞單復(fù)數(shù)等有無錯(cuò)誤。（4）用詞是否得當(dāng)，有無習(xí)語及固定搭配等方面的錯(cuò)誤。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文使用了好的短語，如：on the way to在…的路上， caught our eye吸引我們的眼睛， is available to 為…所獲得，not…but不是…而是，和復(fù)雜多變的句型，如：It can’t be denied that nowadays, our pace of life is so fast that we often neglect the real happiness. 這句話使用了so…that…的句型，We are buried in books and work which seems to be endless.這句話使用了定語從句， From my point of view, happiness lies in every little thing that happens in our daily life.這句話也用了定語從句，

she asked whether I was willing to turn my new clothes into a kind of help這句話使用了賓語從句， Only after she bought all the flowers from the old lady did I realize that we helped her. 這句話使用了倒裝句， It’s our duty and pleasure to help those who are in trouble, and in turn will get happiness.這句話使用了it做形式主語。

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