短文寫(xiě)作(共1題;滿(mǎn)分30分)

請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示,結(jié)合生活中的一個(gè)事例,用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

Making changes can be hard, but it may benefit you a lot. Never underestimate(低估) your power to change yourself!

注意:

無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題,不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)。

內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合生活中的事例。

詞數(shù)為120左右。

除詩(shī)歌外,文體不限。

文中不得透漏個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。

 

 

 

 

One possible version:

Changing ourselves is not only necessary, but inevitable, especially when sometimes we are not able to change the challenging situations at all. Fighting for change is a key trait to our success and it also spirits us up and gives us a new perspective to look at the life and the world.

Something like that happened to me once. There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates while I was walking. Puzzled about why they laughed at me, I decided to find out the answer. One of them told me that the way I walked was very strange and funny. I was overwhelmed with sadness but I just couldn’t change the way I walked. And the situation of being laughed at just didn’t stop. Therefore, I changed my attitude toward the incident. I ignored those comments on me and walked as I used to. The comments soon disappeared and I was so glad to have succeeded in the quiet war.

To sum up, we should keep changing and growing. Sometimes we need to change our life attitude; sometimes we need to change our views of seeing things; sometimes we need to be tolerant; sometimes we need to be strong. Change ourselves according to the specific situation, and our life will be full of strength and vigor.

【解析】

試題分析:本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)屬于材料作文,也屬于開(kāi)放性作文寫(xiě)作,給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高,要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí),首先要準(zhǔn)確把握材料的中心,然后圍繞該中心來(lái)組織要點(diǎn)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)在選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型的基礎(chǔ)上盡量使用高級(jí)詞匯,而且要使所選擇的句式賦予變化。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞,把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體,在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,可以使用諺語(yǔ)或者名人名言來(lái)提升文章的檔次,也能增加文章亮點(diǎn)。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇范文屬于三段式結(jié)構(gòu),不僅層次分明,段落銜接緊密,而且語(yǔ)言流暢自然。文章最大的亮點(diǎn)是高級(jí)詞匯和多種句式的使用。比如inevitable、trait、vigor、 tolerant、therefore和短語(yǔ)spirit up、to sum up等。還有狀語(yǔ)從句especially when sometimes we are not able to change the challenging situations at all,和while I was walking. Puzzled about why they laughed at me定語(yǔ)從句There was a time when I was laughed at by my classmates 并列句兼祈使句Change ourselves according to the specific situation, and our life will be full of strength and vigor.。

考點(diǎn):考查材料作文

 

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