Question

【題目】假如你是一只瀕臨滅絕的華南虎。面對惡劣額的生活環(huán)境，你決定給人類寫一封信，希望能提高人類保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)。信的內(nèi)容如下：
1). 過去的美好時(shí)光：綠色的森林，清新的空氣，自由的生活；
2). 人類對自己和家人的傷害：
⑴過渡捕獵；⑵破壞棲息地；⑶終日生活在饑餓和擔(dān)驚受怕中。
3). 懇請人類保護(hù)動(dòng)物，與它們和諧相處。
注意：1). 詞數(shù)100左右；2). 可以適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)；
Dear man,
I am the South China tiger, an endangered animal.
Yours,
South China Tiger

Answer 1

【答案】Dear man,

I am the South China tiger, an endangered animal. I'm writing to tell you something about my poor living environment which results from your cruel activities.

Looking back, how wonderful it was for us to enjoy the green forest, the fresh air and the free life. However, you hunt too much, decreasing the number of us. Besides, you cut down the trees, which destroyed our habitat. It is your human activities that push us to the edge of extinction. My family and I are living in hunger and fear all day long.

I strongly appeal to you to protect us but not to hurt us. It's our hope that we can live in harmony with each other.

Looking forward to your concern for us!

Yours,

South China Tiger

【解析】本文是一篇英文信件，寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，屬于提綱作文，應(yīng)該按所要求的內(nèi)容來寫，根據(jù)所列的內(nèi)容盡量以簡明扼要的語言來表達(dá)。這篇作文要求新穎靈活：假如你是一只瀕臨滅絕的華南虎。面對惡劣額的生活環(huán)境，你決定給人類寫一封信，希望能提高人類保護(hù)動(dòng)物的意識(shí)。要求以華南虎的口吻來寫，要闡述過去美好的生活環(huán)境，現(xiàn)在人類對家園的破壞，和自身物種的傷害。同時(shí)提出對人類的勸阻和。寫作時(shí)要注意使用高級的詞匯和復(fù)雜的句型，也要適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂藐P(guān)聯(lián)詞承前啟后，用詞要得體，符合語言環(huán)境。