Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友 Eric 在漢語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 表示祝賀；

2. 表揚他為此付出的努力；

3. 表達對他未來的祝愿。

參考詞匯：漢語演講比賽 the Chinese Speech Contest

注意：1. 詞數(shù) 100 字左右；

2. 可適當(dāng)增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Dear Eric,

How’s everything going?

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Eric,

How’s everything going? Learning that you have won the first prize in the Chinese Speech Contest, I’m writing to extend my sincere congratulations to you.

As your friend, I am well aware that it is your diligence, perseverance and effective learning methods that contribute to your success. I am deeply impressed with your standard pronunciation and fluent Chinese. There is no doubt that having a good command of Chinese enables you to see the world through a new window. Chinese learners like you will play an important role in promoting better understanding and cooperation between China and your country.

Wish you greater progress and further success in learning Chinese!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇提綱類寫作。

第1步：根據(jù)提示可知，假如你是李華，你的新西蘭筆友 Eric 在漢語演講比賽中榮獲一等獎。請你給他寫一封祝賀信，內(nèi)容包括：1. 表示祝賀； 2. 表揚他為此付出的努力；3. 表達對他未來的祝愿。

第2步：根據(jù)寫作要求，確定關(guān)鍵詞（組）：the first prize (一等獎)；the Chinese Speech Contest (漢語演講比賽)；impressed with (印象深刻)；play an important role in (在……起重要作用)等。

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。此處文章主要應(yīng)用現(xiàn)在完成時、一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

第4步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。