Question

請按下列提示，以“如何交友”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。（100詞左右）

1）人人都需要朋友，如何交友非常重要；

2）交朋友首先要對別人友善；

3）要使陌生人感到親切，不管他在何處，關心別人勝過關心自己；

4）與別人有分歧，不爭吵，要商量；不要相信那些在危急時刻背離你的人，因為“患難見真情”。

注意：不要逐句翻譯，可以適當加上細節(jié)，如交友的具體做法，使文章通順連貫。

參考詞匯：

be friendly to 對……友善 disagree with與……有分歧

A friend in need is a friend indeed患難見真情

Answer 1

How to make friends

Everyone needs friends, so how to make true friends is very important to anybody.

To make friends, you must be first friendly to others. And often a smile can do it, for the smile is attractive. Smile at others and you are always sure to get a smile in return. Besides, care more about others than about yourself. What’s more, even if you disagree with your others, you should have a good talk with them about it rather than quarrel with them. In addition, try to remember others’ names, which will make them feel that they have made a deep impression on you.

Finally, as a saying goes, a friend in need is a friend indeed, so don’t believe those who leave you when you are in need.

【解析】

試題分析：題目要求根據(jù)所給提示，以“如何交友”為題，用英語寫一篇短文。寫作要點包括：如何交友的重要性；首先要對人友善；關心別人勝過自己；產(chǎn)生分歧時要商量等四個方面。詞數(shù)在100詞左右，注意使用參考詞匯；不要出現(xiàn)標點和拼寫錯誤，盡量保持卷面整潔、字體美觀；注意行文的連貫性。

亮點說明：范文涵蓋了所有的寫作要點，進行了適當?shù)耐卣梗�并注意語句的連貫性；范文還使用了主語從句、表語從句、定語從句等語法知識，具備較強的語言運用能力。

語法方面：主語從句how to make true friends；不定式表目的to make friends；讓步狀語從句even if you disagree with your others；表語從句that they have made a deep impression on you；非限制性定語從句①which will make them feel that they have made a deep impression on you，②as a saying goes；定語從句who leave you when you are in need等，語法知識運用嫻熟，顯示了較強的語法功底，也使作文句式變得多樣；

篇章結構方面：范文注意使用and, besides, what’s more, in addition, finally等來銜接句子和段落，使表達變得更有條理；

短語和搭配方面：范文使用了be friendly to, smile at, be sure to do, in return, care about, rather than, quarrel with, try to do等短語和搭配，使作文的內(nèi)容變得充實。

考點：話題作文