Question

假如你是李華，下星期六是你的生日，你準(zhǔn)備在家開一個(gè)生日晚會(huì)，并邀請(qǐng)部分同學(xué)和外國(guó)朋友參加，晚會(huì)7：30開始。你家住在民族街（Minzu Street）656號(hào)，乘23路或40路公共汽車在一中站下車。你家就在車站的對(duì)面。房子是紅色的。門是白色的，很容易找到。請(qǐng)根據(jù)所給信息，給你的好友Jack寫一封邀請(qǐng)信。
注意： 1. 詞數(shù)100左右；
2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3. 開頭語(yǔ)和結(jié)束語(yǔ)已為你寫好。
656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack, 
Next Saturday will be my birthday. ___________________________________________________________
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Best wishes.
Yours truly,
Li Hua

Answer 1

656 Minzu Street 
November 2, 2013
Dear Jack,
Next Saturday will be my birthday. I’m going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friends are also invited. The activities include singing, dancing and sharing interesting experiences. Surely, we’ll have a good time. I would feel honored if you could come.
I live at 656 Minzu Street. You can take Buses No 23 or No 40 and get off at the stop of  No.One High School. Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it.
I do hope you will come.
Best wishes.
Yours, 
Li Hua

試題分析：本題為材料作文，根據(jù)高考的評(píng)分要求，從兩個(gè)方面分析題目。一是內(nèi)容：題目中圍繞生日派對(duì)展開，涉及到了派對(duì)的時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，交通方式及建筑有什么特點(diǎn)，方便來(lái)訪者能夠找到等內(nèi)容，所以在審題時(shí)要把內(nèi)容審全。二是語(yǔ)言方面。要有好的句式結(jié)構(gòu)，起到畫龍點(diǎn)晴的作用。例如，固定結(jié)構(gòu)，倒裝，強(qiáng)調(diào)等。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所給范文內(nèi)容齊全，且安排合適，文意緊湊，同時(shí)也做到了言簡(jiǎn)意駭。
考點(diǎn): 考查學(xué)生語(yǔ)言的綜合運(yùn)用能力