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【題目】書面表達

最近，由于很多不遵紀守禮的行為，而導致了一些惡劣事故，如：成都女司機由于不文明駕駛而遭致暴力毆打。假設你是李華，請以“遵紀守禮”為主題，寫一篇英語短文，向你校校報投稿。內(nèi)容包括：

（1）中國自古以來就是文明禮儀之邦。

（2）人人都該重禮儀、遵紀守禮。

（3）談談你認為中學生應該如何做到遵紀守禮。

注意： （1）詞數(shù)：100左右。

（2）為使行文連貫，可適當增加細節(jié)。

（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：discipline (U) 紀律 civilized文明的

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving.

Answer 1

【答案】

Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. In my opinion, both beating others and impolite driving are quite bad behaviors.

China is a civilized country with a long history. Our ancestors attached great importance to “Li”—civilized behavior. Every Chinese should obey discipline and behave well.

As middle school students, we should be strict with ourselves. Firstly, we ought to respect the old and take care of children. Besides, we should behave ourselves, such as dining in good manners, waiting in line on many occasions and so on. Last but not least, we must obey school and society discipline, not cheating in exams.

As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious.

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達屬于話題文章，根據(jù)提示信息來說明自己的觀點。請以“遵紀守禮”為主題，內(nèi)容包括：（1）中國自古以來就是文明禮儀之邦。（2）人人都該重禮儀、遵紀守禮。（3）談談你認為中學生應該如何做到遵紀守禮。寫作時注意以下幾點：1、注意審題，仔細閱讀有關提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，明確有哪些要點。2、要依據(jù)提示的觀點，按照一定邏輯關系來寫，不要漏掉要點。3、根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應該用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。 4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點。

【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結(jié)構(gòu)。比如Recently, there has been a heated discussion online about a female driver in Chengdu, who was violently beaten because of her rude driving. 使用固定句式與定語從句；Besides, we should behave ourselves, such as dining in good manners, waiting in line on many occasions and so on.運用排比句；As far as I am concerned, only when we all behave well, can our society be harmonious. 運用倒裝句式；運用了許多連接詞，如Firstly， Besides，Last but not least固定的連接詞，使文章內(nèi)容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫。