Question

11．假如你是李華，開學(xué)之初，你在英語(yǔ)聽力學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，發(fā)郵件向已回美國(guó)的外教Jenny請(qǐng)教，內(nèi)容如下：
1．表達(dá)對(duì)她的思念．
2．英語(yǔ)聽力學(xué)習(xí)遇到的困難．
3．尋求提升英語(yǔ)聽力能力的建議并邀請(qǐng)她方便時(shí)再來(lái)中國(guó)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右．
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
3．郵件開頭已寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）
Dear Jenny，
How are you doing these days？
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
Best wishes!
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假如你是李華，開學(xué)之初，你在英語(yǔ)聽力學(xué)習(xí)上遇到了困難，發(fā)郵件向已回美國(guó)的外教Jenny請(qǐng)教，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：表達(dá)對(duì)她的思念；英語(yǔ)聽力學(xué)習(xí)遇到的困難；尋求提升英語(yǔ)聽力能力的建議并邀請(qǐng)她方便時(shí)再來(lái)中國(guó)．
2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語(yǔ)，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來(lái)寫．本文寫作時(shí)可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)．4．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：see sb off給某人送行；be faced with面對(duì)；Firstly首先；do well in在…方面做得好；Besides另外；make great progress取得巨大進(jìn)步；By the way順便說(shuō)一下；look forward to盼望；
It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）
Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）
By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jenny，
      How are you doing these days？It's almost two months since I saw you off at the airport．（高分句型一）I miss you a lot．
      Thank you so much for your help with my English study．Now I'm faced with some new learning problems．Firstly，I feel it difficult to do well in listening．Besides，I often feel nervous when listening to the tape as the speakers speak so fast that I can't follow them．（高分句型二）I really hope you can give me some good advice on how to improve my listening skills．I believe I can make great progress with your help．
      By the way，please come back to China for a visit whenever it is convenient to you．（高分句型三）I'm looking forward to seeing you again．
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                           Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．