Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號(∧)，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(＼) 劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下劃—橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞：

2．只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。

When I first learn to write in English, I ran into much difficulties. The main problem was that I always thought in Chinese and tried to translate into my own language everything which I came across while I was reading. My teacher advised myself to keep a diary. I followed his advices and put down 100 words or so each day.

Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself as I was learning to express myself with simple English. One day I wrote a story and showed to my teacher. He liked it very much that he read it to the class. All said that the story was the good one. Their words were an great encouragement to me.

Answer 1

【答案】1. learn→learned 2. much→many 3. 去掉which或which→that 4. myself→me 5. advices→advice 6. talk→talking 7. with→in 8. showed后加it 9. very→so 10. the→a

【解析】本文講述作者學英語的經歷。

第一處：考查時態(tài)。由后面的ran可知，此處說的是發(fā)生在過去的事情，應該用一般過去時，故要將learn改為learned。

第二處：考查形容詞。much修飾不可數名詞，many修飾可數名詞復數，修飾difficulties要用many，故要將much改為many。

第三處：考查定語從句。定語從句中，當先行詞是不定代詞時，關系代詞用that而不用which，作賓語時也可以省略，故去掉which或改為that。

第四處：考查代詞。此處是說老師建議我記日記，advise sb to do sth表示“建議某人做某事”，故要將myself改為me。

第五處：考查名詞單復數。advice是不可數名詞，沒有復數形式，故要將advices改為advice。

第六處：考查非謂語動詞。enjoy后要接動名詞作賓語，表示“喜歡做某事”，故要將talk改為talking。

第七處：考查介詞。介詞in后接表示語言的名詞表示“用……語言”，故要將with改為in。

第八處：考查代詞。show sth to sb.表示“把某物展示給某人”，此處指代前面的a story，故要在showed后加it。

第九處：考查副詞。so…that…為固定句型，表示“如此……以致”，故要將very改為so。

第十處：考查冠詞。此處泛指一個好的故事，good是以輔音音素開頭的單詞，故要將good前的the改為a。