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1．假設(shè)你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到中國青年動物保護(hù)聯(lián)盟（ChinaYouthAnimalProtectionAssociation/CYAPA）向全國中學(xué)生招募1000名暑期志愿者進(jìn)行保護(hù)瀕危動物的知識普及活動．你想申請成為其中一員．請用英語寫一封自我推薦郵件．要點(diǎn)如下：1．說明寫信目的；2．簡述個人情況和申請優(yōu)勢；3．表達(dá)期望．
注意：1．字?jǐn)?shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，讓行文連貫；3．開頭，結(jié)尾已給出（不計入你所寫字?jǐn)?shù)）．DearSir/Madam，
I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student．I learnt that China Youth Animal Association wants to recruit 1，000 volunteers to protect endangered animals．I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
Firstly，being a student，I am good at biology．I have a good knowledge of endangered animals．What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）Last but not least，I am eager to appeal to more people to protect them．Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）
On the whole，I'm qualified to be your volunteer．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．I'm looking forward to your reply!
Bestwishes！
Yourssincerely，
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文，根據(jù)提示信息假設(shè)你是李華，在網(wǎng)上看到中國青年動物保護(hù)聯(lián)盟（ChinaYouthAnimalProtectionAssociation/CYAPA）向全國中學(xué)生招募1000名暑期志愿者進(jìn)行保護(hù)瀕危動物的知識普及活動．你想申請成為其中一員．請用英語寫一封自我推薦郵件，寫作時注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示，弄清試題提供的所有信息，要點(diǎn)包括：說明寫信目的；簡述個人情況和申請優(yōu)勢；表達(dá)期望 2、提綱是文章的總體框架，要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進(jìn)行分析、構(gòu)思和想象．要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語，按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫．本文寫作時可以按照要點(diǎn)所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)．4．注意使用高級詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達(dá)：can't wait to do迫不及待；Firstly首先；What's more而且；Last but not least最后同樣最重要；take effective measures采取有效措施；On the whole總的來說；look forward to 盼望；
I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）
Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Sir or Madam，
       I'm Li Hua，a senior 3 student．I learnt that China Youth Animal Association wants to recruit 1，000 volunteers to protect endangered animals．I can't wait to write to you，hoping to seize the opportunity to do something for animal protection．（高分句型一）
       Firstly，being a student，I am good at biology．I have a good knowledge of endangered animals．What's more，nothing can delight me so much as caring for animals that bring us endless comfort and pleasure．（高分句型二）Last but not least，I am eager to appeal to more people to protect them．Only if we human beings take effective measures can they be preserved．（高分句型三）
      On the whole，I'm qualified to be your volunteer．I would appreciate it if my application could get your approval．I'm looking forward to your reply!
      Best wishes！
                                                                                                                                                                                            Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                    Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．