短文改錯

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文， 請你修改你同桌寫的一下作文。 文中共有10處語言錯誤， 每句中最多兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（︿），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉

修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞

注意：1、每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；

2、只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。

Dear Ms. J. K. Rowling,

It is great pleasure to write to you. I like reading all of your Harry Potter book. A few days before, I listened to a radio programme about you. Now I know that you teach English at home and in others countries before you started writing books. I also know that you could only write the first book while your baby daughter was asleep, so you worked on them for five years. That was a very much difficult job. Your son David and your daughter Jessica must be proud for you. I hope I can become as successfully as you when I grow up. Thank you for spending time read my letter.

Yours sincerely,

Michele

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