Question

假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加: 在此處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫出修改的詞。

刪除: 把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改: 在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在其下面寫出修改后的詞。

注意:        1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

                      2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計(jì)分。

Grandma Moses was crazy about painting soon before she picked it up and worked hard at it. She painted careful and her works were nice. She first painted only to please oneself, and then began to sell her works with a little money. In 1993, a collector, Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work hanging in a shop. He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less. Caldor held a show to introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists. Grandma Moses, who was world-famous, was died on December 13, 1961，at the age of 101.

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

 before→after

 careful→carefully

 oneself→herself

 with→for

 happen→happened,

 work→works

 buying →bought,

 less →more

 Moses和other間，加to

 was died→was

【解析】

試題分析：摩斯奶奶在她學(xué)繪畫后不久就對(duì)畫畫癡迷起來(lái)。她畫地非常仔細(xì)，而且作品也非常好。她開始繪畫的時(shí)候只是為了自?shī)首詷罚�但是后�?lái)一位收藏家碰巧發(fā)現(xiàn)了她的作品，便立刻買下了她全部的作品。后來(lái)他為了介紹摩斯奶奶的作品而專門辦了一次畫展。

 考查連詞。soon before she picked it up 由上下文可知她是在學(xué)畫畫之后才會(huì)對(duì)繪畫變得著迷上癮，故把before改成after。

 考查副詞。She painted carefu。修飾動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該用副詞，所以把careful改成carefully。

 考查不定代詞。She first painted only to please oneself,。oneself要隨著主語(yǔ)變化，所以把oneself改成herself。

 考查介詞。and then began to sell her works with a little money，固定短語(yǔ)：sell sth for some money“某物賣了多少錢”，故把 with改成for。

 考查動(dòng)詞時(shí)態(tài)。Louis Caldor happen to see several of Grandma Moses’ work，文章背景是過去時(shí)態(tài)，所以把 happen改成happened，

 考查名詞單復(fù)數(shù)。several of Grandma Moses’ work。由語(yǔ)境可知此處work表示作品，應(yīng)該用復(fù)數(shù)形式，故把work改成works。

 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。He liked them, buying them at once, and set out to look for less 此處表示三個(gè)連續(xù)的動(dòng)作，所以把buying 改成bought。

 考查不定代詞set out to look for less。由語(yǔ)境可知此處表示“更多”的意思，故把less 改成more。

 考查固定短語(yǔ)。introduce the works of Grandma Moses other artists。introduce sth to sb“把……介紹給某人”，故在 Moses和other間，加介詞to。

 考查謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞。who was world-famous, was died on December。die是不及物動(dòng)詞，不用被動(dòng)形式，所以把die前面的was去掉。

考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)。