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3．假如你是李華，是一家英文報社的記者，你的家鄉(xiāng)正在遭受洪水襲擊，請你根據以下提示給報社寫一篇100詞的報道．
1．大雨持續(xù)三天三夜，田野、村莊全部被淹；
2．昨夜洪水爆發(fā)，村民在水中掙扎；
3．解放軍全力搶救，村民轉移到堤岸
4．政府關心，帳篷、食物、藥品、衣物等陸續(xù)到達．
參考詞匯；解放軍PLA men．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們給報社寫一篇100詞的報道，報道家鄉(xiāng)正在遭受洪水襲擊，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語思維，將提供的信息用英語完整流暢的表達出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時態(tài)主要是一般過去時，內容要點包括：大雨持續(xù)三天三夜，田野、村莊全部被淹；昨夜洪水爆發(fā)，村民在水中掙扎；解放軍全力搶救，村民轉移到堤岸；政府關心，帳篷、食物、藥品、衣物等陸續(xù)到達．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為昨夜家鄉(xiāng)遭受洪水襲擊．第二部分為社會各界的大力幫助．
重點短語與句型：
Not only…but also不但…而且
wash  away 沖走
care for關心
高分句型一：Last night，the flood washed houses away and the villagers were in danger and struggling in the water，crying for help．此句用了現在分詞crying 作伴隨狀語
高分句型二：Without the government，a large number of people would have lost their lives in the flood or died of hunger此句用了含蓄虛擬條件句

解答 The heavy rain has been pouring down all the time for three days．Not only fields but also villages have been flooded．Last night，the flood washed houses away and the villagers were in danger and struggling in the water，crying for help（高分句型一）．（昨夜家鄉(xiāng)遭受洪水襲擊）
Just then，the PLA men hurried over by steamboat．They did their best to save villagers and helped them to move onto the riverbank．The government cared for the villagers very much．Tents，food，clothes and medicine were sent to them without delay．Without the government，a large number of people would have lost their lives in the flood or died of hunger（高分句型二）（社會各界的大力幫助）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．