Question

假如你是李華，于11月12日到達(dá)紐約，然后去找你的美國(guó)朋友Tom, 但他不在家。請(qǐng)按以下內(nèi)容給Tom 留張便條。

1. 火車晚點(diǎn)15分鐘，與接你的Tom 錯(cuò)過(guò)。

2. 在火車上認(rèn)識(shí)的定居美國(guó)的華人夫婦Taylor 把你帶到Tom家，Tom不在；

3. 目前在Taylor 夫婦家；

4. 務(wù)必今晚打電話給你；電話號(hào)碼是64611128.

注意

1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)以使行文連貫；

3. 信的開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Dear Tom,

I’m in New York!

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Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Tom,

I’m in New York! It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.

Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.

As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me, so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.

Looking forward to meeting you soon.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：

這是一篇書信類作文，要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出。動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。我們所要做的就是按要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容給Tom留張便條。注意題目的要求，寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要把表格中的要點(diǎn)都寫出來(lái)，不要有遺漏。寫作時(shí)盡量使用自己不會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文章中表達(dá)的時(shí)候使用了詞組和句型：came across 遇上，happen to 碰巧做…put up 住宿，It’s really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. 這句話用了it做形式主語(yǔ)， Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years.這句話用了定語(yǔ)從句， Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語(yǔ)， It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.這句話用了否定詞和比較級(jí)連用表示最高級(jí)的用法。

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