Question

假如你是李華，你的好友劉捷今年以較好的成績考取了上海外國語大學(xué)，請(qǐng)你給她寫封信，以分享她成功的快樂。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：1.對(duì)她的成績表示祝賀；2.肯定她付出的努力；3.決心向她學(xué)習(xí)，明年取得好的成績。

注意：1.詞數(shù)：120-150；

2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

參考詞匯：上海外國語大學(xué)：Shanghai International Studies University

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Liu Jie,

Haven’t seen you for months! I am extremely happy to know that you have been admitted to Shanghai International Studies University!Congratulations!

There is no doubt that you have devoted a lot to your studies, for which I admire you much! I still remember you told me that if one wants to achieve success, her must have a plan first, and then, stick to it. I will do as you told me.

Now, it is my turn to realize my goal in the coming college entrance examination. I will try my best to work hard and I believe I can also get excellent results like you. Please wait for my good news. I won’t disappoint you.

Yours truly,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化。

考點(diǎn)：提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于提綱類作文，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。