【題目】書面表達(dá)

假如你是李華，今年已被一所重點(diǎn)大學(xué)錄取，但家境貧困，難以承擔(dān)大學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)的費(fèi)用，你成為某慈善機(jī)構(gòu)資助的對(duì)象。為此你給該機(jī)構(gòu)負(fù)責(zé)人King女士寫一封信表示感謝。信的內(nèi)容包括：

1. 目前在大學(xué)校園的生活和學(xué)習(xí)狀況

2. 將來的打算

3. 表達(dá)感激之情

注意： 1. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

2. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。

3. 詞數(shù)： 100 詞左右

Dear Ms King,

I’m Li Ming. I have received your letter and schooling fees.

.

.

.

Your sincerely

Li hua

【答案】

Dear Ms King,

I’m Li Ming. I have received your letter and schooling fees. I’m very grateful for your kindness and generosity.

But for your help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now. I’ve made a lot of friends here. Moreover, I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledge of all subjects, which are my major. In fact, I’m making progress each day. Only in this way can I learn more and use what I’ve known to help those in need as well. Besides, I’m determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful.

Words seem to fail me when I try more to express my thanks to you, and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down.

Yours sincerely

Li hua

【解析】

試題分析：本篇書面表達(dá)屬于書信類應(yīng)用文，考生需要根據(jù)出題者提出的要求以貧困學(xué)生李華的名義來寫一封感謝信，感謝為他捐助的慈善機(jī)構(gòu)。在感謝信中，考生要闡述目前現(xiàn)狀及將來的打算，最后還要表達(dá)感激之情。按照命題者的要求，考生可以將文章分為三部分。第一部分是書信類的慣例，開門見山，表明寫作的目的I’m very grateful for your kindness and generosity. 第二部分又分兩個(gè)小部分，分別表明目前現(xiàn)狀及將來的打算。最后一段再次表明感激之情Words seem to fail me when I try more to express my thanks to you, and I’ll keep my promise and not let you down。在表達(dá)過程中靈活使用各種句型，適當(dāng)添加高級(jí)詞匯和短語(yǔ)，就能完成一篇優(yōu)秀的文章。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】

本篇感謝信中最大的亮點(diǎn)在于句型的靈活變化，有but for引導(dǎo)的含蓄條件虛擬語(yǔ)氣But for your help, I couldn’t enjoy a wonderful college life in the beautiful campus right now；有which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語(yǔ)從句 I am studying hard so as to acquire an abundant knowledge of all subjects, which are my major；有only+狀語(yǔ)位于句首，句子部分倒裝Only in this way can I learn more and use what I’ve known to help those in need as well；不定式作目的狀語(yǔ)I’m determined to go back to my hometown after graduation and devote myself to building my hometown, to make it more prosperous and beautiful等等。正文部分的幾乎每句話都可圈可點(diǎn)，十分精彩。除此之外，本文中所使用的短語(yǔ)也表現(xiàn)出作者深厚的語(yǔ)言功底，例如be grateful for；so as to；make progress；be determined to do sth.；devote myself to；words seem to fail me等等。

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