高中三年,你或多或少,或快或慢,在學(xué)習(xí)或生活方面,都在進(jìn)步。請(qǐng)你以My Progress 為題,用英語寫一篇文章,給學(xué)校的英語報(bào)紙投稿。

要求:1. 簡要描述你的進(jìn)步及原因。

2. 畢業(yè)前你下一步的打算。

3.字?jǐn)?shù)120左右。

My Progress

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Not great as it is, I’d like to share with you my progress in my study in these three years. To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feeling tired out and at a loss. Sometimes, I was even on the point of giving up. However, my change happened when my teachers as well as my classmates came to encourage me one day in senior two. It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my slow but steady progress.

Still not a top student as I am now, I have found myself filled with confidence and power to face any difficulty and challenge. There is no denying that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end in the following months!

【解析】這是一篇命題式寫作,要求根據(jù)提示說明,題目已經(jīng)給定大致內(nèi)容,寫作時(shí)要注意適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容,以保證文章的連貫性。文章第一句Not great as it is, I’d like to share with you my progress in my study in these three years中句首用as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,表語提前,構(gòu)成倒裝,表明作者對(duì)三年的學(xué)習(xí)成績的謙虛。第二句To be honest, I was not so good at my study when I came to high school, often feeling tired out and at a loss靈活運(yùn)用短語說明自己剛升入高中時(shí)的學(xué)習(xí)狀態(tài)。第三句Sometimes, I was even on the point of giving up.,be on the piont of表示在...的邊緣;第四句However, my change happened when my teachers as well as my classmates came to encourage me one day in senior two用when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句。最后一句It was their encouragement and my own thinking that resulted in my slow but steady progress.用強(qiáng)調(diào)句式凸顯老師和同學(xué)對(duì)作者的幫助之大。第二段開頭同樣用as引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句,通過Still not a top student as I am now, I have found myself filled with confidence and power to face any difficulty and challenge. 表明自己會(huì)繼續(xù)努力的決心。最后用there be...doing的強(qiáng)調(diào)句式There is no denying that I am bound to fight for my dream to the end in the following months!對(duì)自己將不斷努力進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)?偨Y(jié):命題式作文要緊扣文章主題,寫作時(shí)對(duì)于一些常用的動(dòng)詞,要注意其其他形式以更為簡練的表達(dá)自己的觀點(diǎn),活用各種句型增加文章亮點(diǎn)。

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