Question

10．假如你是紅星中學高三學生李華．你的英國朋友Jim得知你要參加CCTV《朗讀者》節(jié)目的錄制，來信詢問相關情況．請你給Jim回信．內(nèi)容包括：
1．你朗讀的內(nèi)容；
2．你選擇上述內(nèi)容的原因；
3．上述內(nèi)容對你的影響．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于50；
2．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jim，
Dear Jim，
How is it going？Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader．
The book I have chosen is"Fu Lei's Family Letters"in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son．There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．Firstly，you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation，which I believe will touch the youngsters like me．Besides，many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．
The book has an immense influence on me．Actually，it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．Besides，the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future．Thus，it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation．
That's all about it．I hope my introduction can be of some help．Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life？I'm looking forward to your reply!
Yours，
Li Hua

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．
該句型使用了why引導的定語從句，修飾先行詞two reasons；
（高分句型二）many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．
which引導非限制性定語從句，代指前面的many traditional virtues；
（高分句型三）it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．
該句使用了強調(diào)句，即it is this book that…強調(diào)主語this book；
過渡詞使用較好：Firstly；Besides；Actually；Thus；
高級詞匯：profound深遠的；have an immense influence on對…有影響；shape塑造；be of some help有幫助的；

解答 Dear Jim，
    How is it going？Thank you for your support on my upcoming attendance in the CCTV program The Reader．
    The book I have chosen is"Fu Lei's Family Letters"in which he shared his view about art and life in order to guide his son．（高分句型一）There are two reasons why I've decided to read one of his letters to the audience nationwide．Firstly，you can feel the profound fatherly love and his efforts to guide the next generation，which I believe will touch the youngsters like me．Besides，（高分句型二）many traditional virtues，such as integrity，can be found in his works，which can inspire students like us．（介紹朗讀的內(nèi)容）
    The book has an immense influence on me．Actually，（高分句型三）it is this book that changed me from a troubled teen to a caring son．Besides，the wisdom in the book helps me shape a positive attitude towards life and future．Thus，it came to my mind the moment I got the invitation．（朗讀該書的原因）
    That's all about it．I hope my introduction can be of some help．Is there any book that also plays an important role in your life？I'm looking forward to your reply!
                                                                                                                           Yours，
                                                                                                                          Li Hua

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