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【題目】就“吸煙是否有害”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，寫一篇100詞左右的文章，至少包含以下內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)：

1．一些人認(rèn)為吸煙有好處，如：能讓自己放松；帶給自己靈感；是瀟灑和成熟的標(biāo)志；

2．另一些人認(rèn)為吸煙有害健康，如：對(duì)自己的身體有害；使別人吸二手煙，對(duì)他們的身體也有害；污染環(huán)境；

3．你的看法和理由。

參考詞匯：靈感inspiration；瀟灑smartness；成熟maturity；二手煙secondhand smoke

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Answer 1

【答案】The opinions on smoking vary from person to person. Some people are in favor of smoking. They see smoking as an effective way to relax themselves. They also think that inspiration will come at once when they are smoking. Moreover, they even consider it a symbol of intelligence and maturity. Meanwhile, others argue that smoking brings nothing but harm. They think that smoking is harmful to the health of smokers as well as those who are forced to be secondhand smokers. What's worse, smoking pollutes the environment.

As far as I am concerned, I'm firmly against smoking because smoking is not only bad for our body, but also a waste of money.

In a word, it's time for us to stop smoking.

【解析】本文屬于提綱類作文，要求就“吸煙是否有害”這個(gè)主題發(fā)表你的看法，寫一篇100詞左右的文章�？紤]用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)來(lái)寫。要點(diǎn)：1．一些人認(rèn)為吸煙有好處，如：能讓自己放松；帶給自己靈感；是瀟灑和成熟的標(biāo)志；2．另一些人認(rèn)為吸煙有害健康，如：對(duì)自己的身體有害；使別人吸二手煙，對(duì)他們的身體也有害；污染環(huán)境；3．你的看法和理由。這篇文章對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點(diǎn)都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本篇書面表達(dá)要點(diǎn)全面，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，是一篇較好的范文。這篇短文使用了大量的短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少，如:vary from 不同，be in favor of支持。還使用了賓語(yǔ)從句They also think that inspiration will come at once when they are smoking.和賓語(yǔ)句Meanwhile,

others argue that smoking brings nothing but harm.等多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)，增加了文章的可讀性。