Question

【題目】請閱讀下面圖片和文字，并按照要求用英語寫一篇 150 詞左右的文章。

Today with the development of technology, people own all kinds of mobiles phones. Wherever you go, it’s not uncommon to see people obsessed with mobile phones, taking photos, watching videos online, or getting caught up in checking or updating their WeChat Moments. Our life seems to have been taken over by mobile phones and we live in a virtual world created by mobile phones, where we no longer have intimate( 親 密 的 )conversations that bring belly laughs.

Well aware that the overuse of phones will hurt relationships, many people have had enough of this non-interaction, especially when getting together or over meals, and changes are being made at houses. Many Chinese families set a strict “no phones at the dinner table” policy, which hopefully will stop their kids from becoming addicted to mobile phones and prevent more digital invasion of our personal space.

（寫作內(nèi)容）

1. 用約 30 個詞概述上述圖片和文字的內(nèi)容；

2. 用約 120 個詞就”餐桌上禁用手機(jī)”這一話題，談?wù)勀愕目捶ǎ瑑?nèi)容包括:

(1) 簡要闡述這種做法的必要性；

(2) 結(jié)合實際，就如何避免沉迷于手機(jī)提出幾點建議(不少于兩點)。

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays mobile phones are affecting interpersonal communication so much that people tend to be glued to mobile phones over meals, ignoring the nice food being served. Luckily, many Chinese families ban mobile phones at the dinner table.

I sing high praise for the practice. With the fast development of technology, digital devices have taken up people’s little spare time that should have been spent on face-to-face communication with family members. In this case, the practice serves as a timely reminder that people should reflect on their daily behavior concerning phone use and reverse the trend, helping restore dining traditions.

It’s high time that we took effective measures to get rid of our addiction to mobile phones. Firstly, we can limit our use of them purposely, leaving room for real-life communication. Secondly, we can take part in various activities to improve our interpersonal relationships and reach out for our phones only when necessary. Only in this way can we prevent too much digital invasion of our lives.

【解析】

這是一篇看圖作文。先用30個詞概述圖片與文字內(nèi)容，再結(jié)合生活實際，針對沉迷于手機(jī)提幾點建議。題干中沒有給出具體建議，同學(xué)們要結(jié)合自己生活實際，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。

第一步：審題：確定時態(tài)和人稱。第一段總結(jié)部分人稱使用第三人稱，時態(tài)使用一般現(xiàn)在時，描述客觀現(xiàn)象。其余段落以第一人稱和第三人稱為主，描述沉迷于手機(jī)的危害以及自己的看法與建議。

第二步：列提綱 （重點詞組）

sing high praise for（高度贊揚）；taken up people’s little spare time（占用了人們的業(yè)余時間）；face-to-face communication with…（與……面對面交流）；a timely reminder（及時的提醒）；reflect on their daily behavior（反思日常行為）；leaving room for（為……留有空間）；improve our interpersonal relationships（改善人際關(guān)系）等。

第三步：遣詞造句：同學(xué)們在寫作時不能逐句翻譯，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫，同時要點表述要完整，文章要通順，準(zhǔn)確使用時態(tài)和語態(tài)。

第四步：連句成文：寫作時要適當(dāng)使用連詞、過渡詞和插入語，使文章渾然一體。同時恰當(dāng)而合理地使用一些高級詞匯和句型，如定語從句等，以提高文章檔次。