Question

【題目】假如你是李華，你的好友John熱愛繪畫，從小夢想成為—名畫家。但他的家人極力反對，他有些猶豫不決，于是寫信向你征求建議。請你給他寫一封英文回信，要點如下：

1.支持他的夢想；

2.原因（比如：要堅守夢想，畫家不一定沒有好的收入，繪畫是一種高尚的事業(yè)等）；

3.盼望回復(fù)。

注意: 1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.信的格式和開頭語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Dear John,

I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family's objections.________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear John,

I hear that you are not sure about becoming an artist because of your family’s objections. As far as I am concerned, you should stick to your dream and try to become an artist.

For one thing, it has been your dream since you were a child. For another, being an artist doesn’t necessarily mean that you can’t have a stable job or high salary to support yourself. On the contrary, if you try your best, you will be a success artist all over the world. In addition, being an artist is something great, as artists are like bridges that connect human and nature.

I hope you will find these suggestions useful. I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】
這是一篇建議類的應(yīng)用文，文章要點已給出，在寫作時應(yīng)注意以下幾點：

通篇應(yīng)以一般現(xiàn)在時時態(tài)為主。

要點要齊全。但是不要對要點進(jìn)行簡單的羅列�？梢允褂眠m當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞，使上下文行文流暢，銜接自然流程。

注意語氣。由于該作文是對朋友提出建議，所以用語應(yīng)該懇切，要采取充分的例子對觀點進(jìn)行支撐，要多用積極性、鼓勵性的詞匯，以達(dá)到本文寫作目的。

范文亮點：

范文采取了(as far as my concerned…)，(for one thing…for another…)等固定搭配。

文中使用了(stick to do sth.),（on the contrary）,(all over the world),(in addition),(look forward to doing )等高分短語。