【題目】英語(yǔ)課上,老師要求同桌相互修改作文。假設(shè)以下作文為你同桌所寫(xiě),請(qǐng)你對(duì)其進(jìn)行修。共有10處銷誤,每句中最多有兩處。鋁誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、到除或修改。

增加:在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)(∧),并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出改加的詞。

刪除:把多余的詞用斜線(\)劃掉。

修改:在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫錢,并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意:1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞:

2.只允許修改10處,多者(從第11處起)不計(jì)分。

Li Hui,my friend in high school,has dreamed becoming a cartoon artist since she was young. To her disappointed,her parents don't agree with her decision at first Therefore,Li Hui would not change her mind.She worked hardly to perfect her skills.Just before he finished high school,the chance came:the famous art school was holding a cartoon drawing competition The first three winners would be given a scholarship to study drawing there. Li Hui told herself not to missing the chance.She readily entered the competition and came second. She is now a student in that school and I feel certain what her dream would come true.

【答案】1.dreamed 后加 of 或 about

2.disappointed→disappointment

3.don't→didn't

4.Therefore→However

5.hardly→hard

6.he→she

7.the→a

8.missing→miss

9.去掉what或what→that

10.would→will

【解析】本段講述了我的高中朋友為堅(jiān)持要成為一個(gè)卡通藝術(shù)家的夢(mèng)想而努力。

1.dreamed 后加 of about

考查固定搭配。dream表示做夢(mèng), dream of /about (doing)sth.……表示“渴望、向往、,夢(mèng)想成為……”。dreamed后加of/about 。句意:從小就夢(mèng)想成為一名卡通藝術(shù)家

2.disappointed→disappointment

考查固定搭配。To one’s disappointment使某人失望的是。disappointed改為disappointment

3.don't→didn't

考查時(shí)態(tài)。故事發(fā)生在高中時(shí)要用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。故用didn’t。

4.Therefore→However

考查連詞。句意:她的父母起初不同意她的決定,但她卻不會(huì)改變主意。根據(jù)句意此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折。故Therefore改為However

5.hardly→hard

考查副詞。hardly幾乎不,表否定意義。hard努力地。此處指她努力地工作去完善技能。 Hardly應(yīng)為hard

6.he→she

考查代詞。上文提到李慧,代詞用的是she,故he改為she

7.the→a

考查冠詞的用法。根據(jù)句意:就在她上完高中,一個(gè)機(jī)會(huì)來(lái)了。首次提到,而且是可數(shù)名詞的單數(shù)。故the改為a

8.missing→miss

考查非謂語(yǔ)。 tell sb. not not to do sth.告訴某人不要做某事, to 后要用動(dòng)詞原形

9.去掉whatwhat→that

考查名詞從句。I feel certain后面是一個(gè)名詞從句,從句句子完整,應(yīng)用關(guān)系詞that,也可省略that。故去掉what或把what換成that。

10.would→will

考查一般將來(lái)時(shí)。句意:她現(xiàn)在是那所學(xué)校的學(xué)生,我確信她的夢(mèng)想會(huì)實(shí)現(xiàn)。根據(jù)句意判斷是一般將來(lái)時(shí),而非過(guò)去將來(lái)時(shí)。故would改為will。

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