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【題目】短文改錯(cuò)

We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact, everyone wants to successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all start with your belief system. Your belief system starts with what you feel about yourself. You must at the first believe in yourself. On your journey to succeed, you will find that there are no shortcuts. You will never be able to completely master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so will only lead to disappointment. Besides, it's necessary of you to have clear goals. You'd better put down your goals on paper where they are visible so that they can help to monitor your progress.

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文章作者主要講述我們每個(gè)人都想要成功，但如何才能成功呢？作者給我們一些建議。

第一處：形容詞形式用法錯(cuò)誤。因?yàn)橛?/span>than所以用形容詞的比較級(jí)。句意：對(duì)一些人來(lái)說(shuō)，欲望要大于普通人。故將great改為greater。

第二處：句法錯(cuò)誤。形容詞successful前缺少be動(dòng)詞。句意：事實(shí)上，每個(gè)人都想要成功。故在successful前加be。

第三處：詞性用法錯(cuò)誤。work既可作動(dòng)詞也可作名詞。句意：但很少有人愿意付出辛勤勞動(dòng)的代價(jià)。故將working改為work。

第四處：詞性用法錯(cuò)誤。修飾名詞 secrets應(yīng)該用形容詞。句意：成功是一種態(tài)度,它沒(méi)有什么真正的秘訣可言。故將really改為real。

第五處：主謂一致用法錯(cuò)誤。主語(yǔ)為it，謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)該使用第三人稱(chēng)單數(shù)形式。句意：一切都從你的信仰體系開(kāi)始。故將start改為starts。

第六處：連接詞用法錯(cuò)誤。feel為連系動(dòng)詞，故用how。句意：你的信仰體系始于你對(duì)自己的感覺(jué)。故將what改為how。

第七處： 短語(yǔ)用法錯(cuò)誤。短語(yǔ)at first起初。句意：你必須首先相信自己。故將the去掉。

第八處：詞性用法錯(cuò)誤。to為介詞，故用名詞作賓語(yǔ)。句意：在你成功的路上。故將succeed改為success。

第九處：非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用法錯(cuò)誤。動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。句意：試圖這樣做只會(huì)導(dǎo)致失望。故將attempt改為attempting。

第十處：介詞用法錯(cuò)誤。在句式“It is(was)+adj+ for sb.+ to do sth”中，作表語(yǔ)的形容詞大多是表事物性質(zhì)的靜態(tài)形容詞；而在句式“It is(was)+adj.+of sb. to do sth.”中，作表語(yǔ)的形容詞大多是表示人物特征的形容詞。句意：你有明確的目標(biāo)是必要的。故將of改為for。