Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你聽說美國青年 Martin在北京開了一間茶室（tea house），該茶室面向年輕人提供世界各地的茶飲。你對茶文化感興趣，請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：

1. 對該茶室的作用作出肯定的評價；

2. 表達(dá)你想暑假期間到該茶室當(dāng)志愿者的愿望，并說明其目的。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3. 郵件的開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)

Dear Martin,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student in China. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

【答案】Dear martin,

I’m Li Hua, a high school student in China. I’m so glad to learn that you have opened a tea house in Beijing that provides teas from around the world for young people. No doubt this gives us a good chance to appreciate the tea cultures of the world and thus helps us to develop a better understanding of the world.

As a young Chinese who is interested in tea culture, I do hope I can work as a volunteer in your tea house during the summer vacation so that I can help to make the tea cultures of the world known to more young people. I would greatly appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文，要求寫一封信。

第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲取重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，假定你是李華，你聽說美國青年 Martin在北京開了一間茶室（tea house），該茶室面向年輕人提供世界各地的茶飲。你對茶文化感興趣，請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1. 對該茶室的作用做出肯定的評價；2. 表達(dá)你想暑假期間到該茶室當(dāng)志愿者的愿望，并說明其目的。第二，人稱為第一人稱和第三人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時。

第二步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段，對該茶室的作用做出肯定的評價。第二段， 表達(dá)你想暑假期間到該茶室當(dāng)志愿者的愿望，并說明其目的。第三段，期望回復(fù)。

第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語: opened a tea house，provides tea，No doubt， appreciate the tea cultures of the world，develop a better understanding of the world，be interested in，work as，during the summer vacation，take my application into consideration。

第四步：確定較為高級的句子:that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句和that引導(dǎo)的定語從句 I’m so glad to learn that you have opened a tea house in Beijing that provides teas from around the world for young people. who引導(dǎo)的定語從句和so that 引導(dǎo)的目的狀語從句 As a young Chinese who is interested in tea culture, I do hope I can work as a volunteer in your tea house during the summer vacation so that I can help to make the tea cultures of the world known to more young people。

第五步：連句成文，注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞進(jìn)行過渡銜接:besides, however, Finally。

第六步：注意書寫，保持卷面整潔，避免劃線，亂擦。