Question

【題目】假如你是大學一年級新生李華。開學之初，你的英語老師Ms Li希望了解每位同學的英語學習情況，并征求教學建議。請按以下要點用英語給她寫一封信。

1.對英語學習的認識；

2.自己目前的英語水平；

3.自己英語學習存在的主要問題；

4.對英語教學的兩點建議。

注意：

1.詞數100左右；

2.信的開頭和結尾已給出。

Dear Ms Li,

I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.

Thank you!

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Ms Li,

I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.

As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.

My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.

Thank you!

【解析】

試題分析：本文考查建議信書面表達。除卻按照要求寫作文，還要注意一般信的格式，既然是教學建議,就要詳細介，英語學習中存在問題，向老師提出合理化的學習建議,希望老師給以指導等情況。尊稱要得體。

亮點說明：本文有了一般的書信格式，結構清楚。運用了一些比較好的短語，例如：a global village，get more and more important，feel nervous，give me good advice on, make much progress in English等，其句型也可謂是精彩紛呈，比如狀語從句的使用：As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important；表語從句的使用: the two main problems in my study are that I；賓語從句的使用：I really hope that you can；一些連詞的使用使得句子間通順流暢，如so，and,等。