Question

目前，青少年追星成為一個(gè)非常普遍的現(xiàn)象。有些青少年對(duì)偶像崇拜(celebrity worship)近乎癡迷。請(qǐng)你就青少年追星這一話題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。要點(diǎn)包括：

1. 你如何看待青少年追星這一現(xiàn)象； 2. 青少年追星對(duì)其自身有何影響。

注意：

1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容完整充實(shí)。2. 詞數(shù)： 120 左右。

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

one possible version:

These days probably every teenager in the world has a poster of someone they worship stuck on their wall. For some teens, celebrity worship is simply a part of maturing and entering the adolescent world. There is nothing to worry about. Celebrities who promote ethical behavior and make responsible personal decisions can have a positive effect on teenagers. But for some teenagers who develop an unhappy obsession with a celebrity, parents and teachers should pay a lot of attention. They are so obsessed with celebrities that they cannot concentrate on their studies. They expect to live like a celebrity so that they often do something impractical.

While it is normal for teenagers to idolize some celebrities, parents should take action if they suspect a teen is too obsessed with celebrities and becoming indifferent to school. They should encourage their children to become involved with school activities. Also, I think the celebrities should set a good example of how to live and act to have positive effects on their fans.

【解析】

試題分析：本文的話題是青少年追星。要點(diǎn)包括：1. 你如何看待青少年追星這一現(xiàn)象；2. 青少年追星對(duì)其自身有何影響。還有詞數(shù)的要求是120 左右。認(rèn)真閱讀并分析可知，這是一篇議論文，要求我們說(shuō)明一個(gè)現(xiàn)象，應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)則應(yīng)該用表達(dá)個(gè)人看法的詞或短語(yǔ)，如I think等。注意長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合，注意人稱和時(shí)態(tài)等的一致性。還有盡可能用比較高級(jí)的詞匯和表達(dá)，和句子之間的連貫性。

【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文分兩段說(shuō)明青少年追星現(xiàn)象和影響以及個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)，層次分明，內(nèi)容清晰。在文中使用who引導(dǎo)的定語(yǔ)從句和so…that/so that結(jié)構(gòu)，和have sb. do句式。運(yùn)用的短語(yǔ)有have a positive effect on，be so obsessed with，concentrate on，become involved with等。While 和Also等連詞的運(yùn)用使句子之間的連貫性增強(qiáng)了。

考點(diǎn)：提綱作文。