Question

假如你叫朱文，你的美國筆友Rick欲了解中國學(xué)生“學(xué)雷鋒小組(Learn-from-Lei Feng Group)”是怎么回事兒。請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)用英語寫一封120—150詞的電子郵件。
(1) 簡(jiǎn)要介紹雷鋒其人。
雷鋒出生在湖南省望城縣,雖然只有短暫的22歲，但他作為一名解放軍戰(zhàn)士，努力工作，樂于助人，一生做好事無數(shù)，被視為民族英雄，人們的楷模。
(2)中學(xué)生學(xué)雷鋒小組的情況：人數(shù)不等，自主結(jié)合，志愿做好事
(3)你對(duì)此類活動(dòng)的看法。

Answer 1

Dear Rick,
I’m glad you are interested in our Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups. First of all, you might need to know who Lei Feng is. Born in Wangcheng, Hunan, Lei Feng lived a short life of only 22years. As a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a national hero and morel for every citizen.
There are lots of Learn-from-Lei Feng Groups in China’s middle schools, all of which formed voluntarily and are usually small in size: in threes or fours or more. The groups carry out various activities such as cleaning up streets or parks, helping out in homes for the elderly, and so on.
I believe such activities are of great value in educating the people and building a harmonious society.
Yours,
Zhu Wen

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