Question

短文改錯（共10小題;每小題1分，滿分10分）
假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句最多有兩處，每處錯誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞;
2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。
I saw an accident happened on my way to home this afternoon. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards her. The young man saw the girl and tried to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly hurt and couldn’t move. The young man didn’t
know how to do. I ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent her hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.

Answer 1

【小題1】happened-happen
【小題2】to 去掉
【小題3】while—when
【小題4】and—but
【小題5】her—his
【小題6】how—what
【小題7】reached—arrived
【小題8】sent her + to
【小題9】policeman—policemen
【小題10】was去掉或加he

解析【小題1】see sb do sth，所以把happened改成happen
【小題2】home是副詞不要介詞，所以to 去掉
【小題3】while表示一段時(shí)間，when表示時(shí)間點(diǎn)
【小題4】句意是：男子想停下，但是太快了停不下，兩句話是轉(zhuǎn)折的關(guān)系，and改成but
【小題5】his代指the man’s
【小題6】what做do的賓語，how不能做賓語。
【小題7】reached是及物動詞，arrived是不及物動詞。
【小題8】sent sb  to“把某人送到”
【小題9】one of 后面接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)。所以policeman改成policemen
【小題10】while的時(shí)間狀語從句沒有主語，加he，或者was去掉。用while doing