Question

假如你叫李明，你的一位美國(guó)筆友Peter要來(lái)廈門(mén)旅游，他想先請(qǐng)你 
向他簡(jiǎn)單地介紹一下廈門(mén)的大致情況�，F(xiàn)在，請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)一封電子郵件，    
郵件必須包括如下內(nèi)容：
1. 廈門(mén)位于福建東南方向, 是福建省第四大島嶼，是中國(guó)最干凈的城市， 
有“海上花園”之稱。
2. 廈門(mén)始建于1394年，宋朝初期，歷史悠久。20世紀(jì)80年代初又被宣
布為經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)。
3. 廈門(mén)氣候宜人，冬暖夏涼，特色小吃眾多
4. 著名的鼓浪嶼島、動(dòng)物園、環(huán)島路和南普陀寺等每年吸引著眾多國(guó)內(nèi)
外游客
注意： 1. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使文章連貫   2. 詞數(shù)120左右
3. 文章開(kāi)頭已為你寫(xiě)好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)
4. 文字內(nèi)容書(shū)寫(xiě)不得超出框外
參考詞匯：1.宋朝：Song dynasty 2.宣布：declare 3.經(jīng)濟(jì)特區(qū)：Special Economic Zone
4.鼓浪嶼：Gulang island 5.環(huán)島路Huandao Road 6.南普陀寺South Putuo Temple

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear that ypu will come to Xiamen for a visit. As you know, Xiamen is a beautiful  city, which is located in Southeast of Fujian province. It is considered as the cleanest city in China .Therefore, people call Xiamen "the garden on the sea" .It is the fourth largest city in China. Xiamen has a long hitory. It was first founded in 1394 at the beginning of the Song dynasty and was declared one of China’s first Special Economic Zones in the early 1980’s. Xiamen has a pleasand climate, which is warm in winter,cool in summer. In Xiamen you also can eat a lot of special delicious food. What’s more, the famous Gulang island, as well as South Putuo Temple and zoo attract many visitors from home and abroad every year. I hope you will have a good time during your stay in Xiamen.
I’m looking forward to seeing you soon.          
Your friend,
Li Ming

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